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    KUCH MEREE BHEE SUNIAY !!!!

    Since you all are putting up your problems over here for comments …so I thought why should I stay behind………..
    Now what is my problem…..let me sing it for you:

    Meray dostoan mujhay ajj kal nah to chain hay nah karar hay
    Mera sirf itna kasoor hay mujhay eak LARKAY say pyar hay

    Tumhain dil ka haal sunaoan kaya
    Who hay koan tum ko bataoan kaya
    Meri arzoo ka woh geet hay
    Meri dharkanaon ki woh pukar hay

    Kabhee sochati hoan woh door hay
    Kabhi sochati hoan woh pass hay
    Mujhay halka halka sa hoash hay
    Mujhay halka halk khumar hay

    Meray dostoan mujhay ajj kal nah to chain hay nah karar hay
    Mera sirf itna kasoor hay mujhay eak LARKAY say pyar hay

    So guys tell me what should I do…..he is not aware of my feelings for him…….it is a very serious problem…..meray din raat ka chain kharab ho gaya hay……

    PLEASE HELP!!!!!

    Sharmelee !!!!!



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    Sharmelee-Bano

    [This message has been edited by Sharmelee (edited February 17, 1999).]

    #2
    ASSALAMUALAIKUM,
    I had read your poem.It is
    really amaizing.If you love some one then be
    proud and tell him that you love him.I think
    he will have same feelings for you as you
    have for him.MAY GOD HELP YOU...............
    ........................................
    KHUDA HAFIZ.

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      #3
      I read your poem. I am sure quality of your feelings is better than that of the poem.

      I am sure you will succeed if you do not insist on marriage.

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        #4
        dear shermilee,
        A.A.
        i read ur poem that was realy very good and i hope that in future u 'll continue this type of try and on this i asure u that u 'll be very good poet , I am not in Pkistan but i am in N. Cyprus nad over here i am making my MBA ,It is realy very delightful that when we read anything from or about pakistan, We LOVE PKISTAN very much ,
        If i am not wrong then u 'll not any gril because sometimes we also do this type of "SHRARET"
        UR'S TRUELY.
        S.H.BUKHARI.


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          #5
          Ahhhhhhhh……………Duhhhhhhhhhhh

          TANVEER JEE: app nay kabhi muhubaat ki hay….janab kisi ko apni feelings kay baray main batana itna aasan nahin hay….the other thing is that we are family friends…..and what happen if he doesn't have the same feelings for me. May be he doesn't feel that way about me….but how should I convince myself?????

          PG HAZOOR: you are right the quality of my feelings is far better then this poetry……
          Lekin app to kah rahay hain shadee nah karo…array hum app jesay nahin kah mohubaat kisi aur say aur shadee kisi aur say…..zarah ghoar kijiay.

          HASSAN DEAR: hum 100% larki hain….humaree yahan jaan per banee hay aur app ko mazaq sooj raha hay. I can't afford to crack a joke concerning such serious issue about my life. Aur jee humain shair bananay ka shoak nahin tha…bus un kee mohabat main bun bethay

          AARZ KIYA HAY:

          App say gilah app ki qasam
          sochatay rahay kar sakay nah hum

          uss ki kya khata la dawa hay ghum
          kiyoan gilah karain charah gar say hum

          yah agar nahin yaar ki gali
          chaltay chaltay kiyoan ruk gay kadam

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            #6
            Yah agar nahin yaar ki gali
            Chalate chalate kiyon ruk gaye kadam

            This is better one. You may have a future in poetry though I am not sure about love.

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              #7
              Shukriah PG

              Humain poetry main mustaqbil nahin chahiay……….
              App ko zarah bhee humdardee nahin hum say……….
              Kuch aur nahin kar saktay to Duwa he kardain……..
              App kay comments parh kar yah kahnay ko jee cahta hay:

              SUCH HEE HAY BEKAR HUMAIN GHAUM HOTA HAY
              JO CHAHA THA DUNIYA MAIN KUM HOTA HAY

              DHALTA SOORAJ, PHELA JANGAL, RASTAH GUUM
              HUM SAY POCHO KESA AALUM HOTA HAY

              DARD TO HUMNAY IN ANKHOAN SAY DEKHAY HAIN
              SUNTAY HAIN KAH MARHUM HOTA HAY

              Is there any way I can just forget about him………???????

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                #8
                MISS. SHARMELEE

                You problem is quite complicated………..
                BTW who told you to fall in love with such a man who doesn't have any feelings for you.
                Dear life is going to become complicated that way. May be he is not good for you. Love that person who has the capability of loving you back., as you'll get tired of such a person who is just like a stone after some time.

                Give it a thought!!!!
                MOON

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                  #9
                  Shermilee Ji

                  I am sorry I read your poem (if you call it a poem) a little late.
                  My first response was like

                  Mera ye haal dekha to zamana mujh se ye kahne laga
                  Tumhe chaaye koi elaje ab , ke tumhe halka halka Bukhar he

                  Sharmeeli Ji
                  Jin ko Muhabbat hoti he wo sare aam us ka shuhra nahi kerte phirte.
                  Muhabbat to beawaz hoti he, is ki Khsboo mahssos ki ja sakti he magar is ko aap choo nahi sakte.
                  Chaloo aaj etna he kaffee he

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                    #10
                    Dear Sharmelee, I have all the humdardee about you. Have been through these idiotic situations in life and have written poems too. Just wanted you to check if you are not running on a blocked and closed road. Bye and good luck.

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                      #11
                      Fatah JEE,

                      Humain bhee koie apna ishtahar banay ka shoak nahin hay……….
                      I visited this site and found out some wise people are here….so thought to say some thing.
                      No body knows who am I and who that person is. Janab Buzdil to who loag hotain hain jin main yah kabool karnay kee himaat nahin hotee kah who kisi to chatay hain.

                      I don't believe in idealism but I have always this image of a person in my mind…and when after such a long time when I happen to come across such a person…..every thing has become so difficult.
                      Yah mantay hain hum kah muhabbat eak kushboo hay lekin yah kushboo app ki jaan bhee lay saktee hay.
                      Yah mantay hain hum kah mohabat to chowa nahin ja sakta per mahsoos to kar saktay hain.
                      Janab kisi ko Dil say nikalna itna aasaan nahin hota……..
                      Aur hum app jesay Bahadur to hain nahin kah Yadoan kay saharay zindagee guzar dain…..

                      HUM PEHLEE DAFAH YAHAN AAIN HAIN…AGAR APP KO HUMARA AANA BURA LAGA HAY TO AAINDAH NAHIN AAIN GAY.

                      ……….Dewarooan say batain karna accha lagta hay
                      Hum bhee pagal ho jian gay essa lagta hay

                      Kis ko Qasar pthar maro koan paraya hay
                      Sheesh mehal main ek ek chahrah apna lag ta hay


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                        #12
                        Sharmelee Ji

                        Nahi nahi
                        Chasme-ma roshan
                        Dil-e- mashad
                        aap shoq se ayeye. Ye sub hamar, hum sub ki mahfil he. yehan koi na ajnabi he or na koi mahman.
                        I am terribly sorry if I said some thing wrong.
                        I thought that you are just kidding.
                        Who can understand a love better than me . I can very well feel your sentiments now.

                        If you are in " true love" then go ahead don't ask any body, JUMP in this fire. Don't think twice and don't think about the result. The love is war in which there is no defeat.
                        If you loss the battle or win it, You will win the war either way
                        Let me quote you a very beautiful shere from a beautiful shaier Faiz ahmed Faiz, just to make you feel better.

                        Gur baazi ishq ki baazi he, jo chaho laga do der kesa
                        Gur jeet gaye to kiya kehna, hare bhi to baazi maat nahi

                        [This message has been edited by Fatah (edited February 17, 1999).]

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                          #13
                          Shukriah FATAH JEE,

                          I can guarantee you that my love is "true love"……….this what I used to think that true love can change every thing….but nothing seems to be happening on the other end….

                          Zindagee main eak hee bandah accha laga aur who bhee……….Allah Mian essa kiyoan karta hay…..
                          Jub humain woh cheez mil nahin saktee to uss kay kareeb kiyoan lata hay.
                          I haven't given up hope…though Fatah I can never dare to tell him how I feel…iss liay kah:

                          "Yah mohabat bhee ajeeb cheez hay…….jahan iqrar kee puree umeed ho Dil wahan Bhee kahnay say darta hay…..aur mujhay to inkar ka pura yaqeen hay"…..abb app he batain main kaya karooan….
                          Just relying on God……

                          I tried very hard not to think about him….and try to like some one else…..there are people around me who are willing to put their heart on my feet…..but NAZRAIN JAHAN TAHREE HAIN WAHAN SAY HILNAY KA NAM NAHIN LATAIN……………

                          ……..Ghalib kahtay hain……

                          Aah ko chahiay ek umar aasar honay tak
                          Koan jee ta teri zulff kay sar honay tak

                          Aashaqee sabar talaq aur tamana deta
                          Dil ka kya rang karon khoonay jigar honay tak

                          Gumay hastee ka ho "ASAD" kis say juz-margay ailaj
                          shumah jalti hay her rang main sahar honay tak



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                          Sharmelee-Bano

                          [This message has been edited by Sharmelee (edited February 17, 1999).]

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                            #14
                            Koan jee ta hain teri zulff kay sar honay tak

                            Does it mean that you will not wait for him till he gets bald?

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                              #15
                              Sharmlee jee

                              Tou urz hay:

                              Uggar hullka hullka saa bukhar hay
                              tou leejeeay thundaa paani durkar hay

                              Housh main aa jaain gay aap juldi
                              Dumagh kpou lugay jee jou houwa thundi

                              Huzoor yeah payar aik murz la illaj hay
                              Plut jayeeay wapis yeah rusta bohut khurab hay!

                              Shaheen-Iqbal Malik
                              17th Feb 99

                              Main aap ki khidmat main aada buja lata houn

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