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    Ashaar,Rubai,Ghazal or Nazam.

    Asalaam Alaikum,
    Piyare Pakistani bhaiyoo ur bhaihnoo
    I would like to have some nice Urdu(panjabi bhi chalain gai)Ashaar collection.Please send me some of ur favourite Ashaar if u get time from ur busy GUP...GUP...GUPSHUP.Specially I want to invite Enterprise2 & Aarzo to send me ashaar.
    A request from Kuwait,
    Cinderella.

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    #2
    So, you're from Kuwait eh,
    I thought so.
    Kuwait is also me home land, you've got to talk to me, 'cuz if you R who I think you,
    then you're in for beating!

    But if you're not, then please carry on and
    think nothing of this!

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      #3
      You can contact me at [email protected]
      Please, write to me and kill my curiosity, before it kills me!

      [This message has been edited by Enterprise.]

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        #4
        Dear Enterprise,
        u r mistaken coz' I don't know u,actually I have asked Enterprise 2 to send me ashaar,his sister is my friend & as u know they have a very "FASEEH" kind of urdu.
        so sorry.....
        I'm not the one u r looking for.But please u too can send me some ashaar.


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          #5
          OK, Look, here's the deal. I dont think I'll be able to assist you in the shairy stuff.

          But please do me a favor and write to me at the given address. I dont get people from Kuwait every day, U know.
          I know Enterprise2 very well and I'm sure he'll be able to mail you some good verses.
          I f you like I can give you his mailing address.
          But please kill me curiosity!

          Thanx and no hard feelings, I dont normally beg,
          but I guess I dont have a choice!

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            #6
            Here is just one last TRY

            Does the name, MISS FARKHANDA MAZHAR ring a bell,
            or how about
            MR TARIQ?

            Studied in ISCP?

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              #7
              Salams Cinderella
              my selection may not touch the standards of enterprise or Arzoo, i have just started learning Urdu Poetry but as no body is participating i will do the posting to get back to the subject

              Enterprise jee

              Yeh shart hai Dastuk ho aghar Daste-yaqin se
              Der chor ke deewar bhi khul gain kahain se

              Sach much kahain lagta hai ke mujood hai dunia
              Hum wahum bhi karte hain to karte hain yaqin se




              [This message has been edited by Azad.]
              Meray Roz O Shab k Nisaab Main Meray Paas Apna To Kuch Nahi

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                #8
                well,
                yes i was one of ISCP student....long ago
                I can keep writing to u till the time I'm in Kuwait,coz' I'll be going to Toronto in jan/99.
                Have a nice day

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                  #9
                  Thank you very much Azad

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                    #10
                    well if you need me to stop writing here please let me know

                    Mojiza koi mere aehid main bhi zahir ho
                    Mera mazi meri qismat main dobara lekh de

                    Sangh o ahen ke makanoon se bohut door kahain
                    lab e sahil koi mathi ka gharonda lekh de

                    Meray Roz O Shab k Nisaab Main Meray Paas Apna To Kuch Nahi

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                      #11
                      Tanz hai sokhta janoon pe gharajte badil
                      ya to ghanghor ghatain na utha, ya barsa
                      **

                      I have few poems wrote by my friend i am not sure whether i should share it with others or not

                      Meray Roz O Shab k Nisaab Main Meray Paas Apna To Kuch Nahi

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                        #12
                        Shayd koi khwahish roti rehti hai
                        Mere andh'r baarish hoti rehti hai

                        Meray Roz O Shab k Nisaab Main Meray Paas Apna To Kuch Nahi

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                          #13
                          pal do pal

                          Main pal do pal ka shayer hoon
                          pal do pal meri kahani hai
                          pal do pal meri hasti hai
                          pal do pal meri jawani hai
                          ...

                          Meray Roz O Shab k Nisaab Main Meray Paas Apna To Kuch Nahi

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                            #14
                            Adab Arz,
                            Most of you are Budzawk. You people have no taste. Here is some real Shairy:

                            Johny Johny, Johny Ka Dil Aya Tujh Pe Julee
                            Tere Leeye Char Jaon Solee
                            Tu To meree Jan Hai Jan Hai Jaan Haai.....

                            Like it want more ok :

                            Re Mama Mama Maya
                            Piyar Kee Garee Aur Chalao
                            Aceletor Aur Dabao
                            Piyar mai Mast Ho Jao...

                            Shukriya Shukriya Ek dafa aur? Acha to phir ye sunye:

                            Na Maine Signal Dekha
                            Na toone signal Dekha
                            Accident Ho Gaya raba Rabaaa....

                            and before I go :

                            Hum dono Kamere Mai Bund Hoooo........
                            ..................Aur Chabee Kho Jai

                            Freinds this is culture, this is real poetry, arent you glad I introduced you to the finer things in life?
                            Stud.

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                              #15
                              Stud ji ,
                              This is for u
                              Na Toata Na Toati Na Toatai Ke Par
                              Ae Ol-Loo Ke Pathay To Shairy Na Kar

                              just kidding.....
                              aap ka zawq tu bahut aala hai,I never have seen such a great Shairy in my life Wow!
                              So keep sending ur Aala Shairy...I enjoy it

                              Ahsaas Ke Andaaz Badal Jatai Hai Warna
                              Anchal bhi Osi Taar se Banta Hai Kafan Bha

                              Chand Badla Hai Kabhi Jheel Badal Janai Se
                              Aeena Koi Bhi Ho Aks Tomhara Hoga

                              Suntai Hai Ke Har Chees Milti Hai Dua Se
                              Ek Rooz Tumhai Mang Ke Dekhai Gai Khuda se

                              Till next time
                              Allah Hafiz
                              Cinderella

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