Ashaar,Rubai,Ghazal or Nazam.

[Cinderella]

Asalaam Alaikum,
Piyare Pakistani bhaiyoo ur bhaihnoo
I would like to have some nice Urdu(panjabi bhi chalain gai)Ashaar collection.Please send me some of ur favourite Ashaar if u get time from ur busy GUP...GUP...GUPSHUP.Specially I want to invite Enterprise2 & Aarzo to send me ashaar.
A request from Kuwait,
Cinderella.

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[Enterprise]

So, you're from Kuwait eh,
I thought so.
Kuwait is also me home land, you've got to talk to me, 'cuz if you R who I think you,
then you're in for beating!

But if you're not, then please carry on and
think nothing of this!

[Enterprise]

You can contact me at [email protected]
Please, write to me and kill my curiosity, before it kills me!

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[Cinderella]

Dear Enterprise,
u r mistaken coz' I don't know u,actually I have asked Enterprise 2 to send me ashaar,his sister is my friend & as u know they have a very "FASEEH" kind of urdu.
so sorry.....
I'm not the one u r looking for.But please u too can send me some ashaar.


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[Enterprise]

OK, Look, here's the deal. I dont think I'll be able to assist you in the shairy stuff.

But please do me a favor and write to me at the given address. I dont get people from Kuwait every day, U know.
I know Enterprise2 very well and I'm sure he'll be able to mail you some good verses.
I f you like I can give you his mailing address.
But please kill me curiosity!

Thanx and no hard feelings, I dont normally beg,
but I guess I dont have a choice!

[Enterprise]

Here is just one last TRY

Does the name, MISS FARKHANDA MAZHAR ring a bell,
or how about
MR TARIQ?

Studied in ISCP?

[Azad]

Salams Cinderella
my selection may not touch the standards of enterprise or Arzoo, i have just started learning Urdu Poetry but as no body is participating i will do the posting to get back to the subject

Enterprise jee

Yeh shart hai Dastuk ho aghar Daste-yaqin se
Der chor ke deewar bhi khul gain kahain se

Sach much kahain lagta hai ke mujood hai dunia
Hum wahum bhi karte hain to karte hain yaqin se




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[Cinderella]

well,
yes i was one of ISCP student....long ago
I can keep writing to u till the time I'm in Kuwait,coz' I'll be going to Toronto in jan/99.
Have a nice day

[Cinderella]

Thank you very much Azad

[Azad]

well if you need me to stop writing here please let me know

Mojiza koi mere aehid main bhi zahir ho
Mera mazi meri qismat main dobara lekh de

Sangh o ahen ke makanoon se bohut door kahain
lab e sahil koi mathi ka gharonda lekh de

[Azad]

Tanz hai sokhta janoon pe gharajte badil
ya to ghanghor ghatain na utha, ya barsa
**

I have few poems wrote by my friend i am not sure whether i should share it with others or not

[Azad]

Shayd koi khwahish roti rehti hai
Mere andh'r baarish hoti rehti hai

[Azad]

pal do pal

Main pal do pal ka shayer hoon
pal do pal meri kahani hai
pal do pal meri hasti hai
pal do pal meri jawani hai
...

[Stud]

Adab Arz,
Most of you are Budzawk. You people have no taste. Here is some real Shairy:

Johny Johny, Johny Ka Dil Aya Tujh Pe Julee
Tere Leeye Char Jaon Solee
Tu To meree Jan Hai Jan Hai Jaan Haai.....

Like it want more ok :

Re Mama Mama Maya
Piyar Kee Garee Aur Chalao
Aceletor Aur Dabao
Piyar mai Mast Ho Jao...

Shukriya Shukriya Ek dafa aur? Acha to phir ye sunye:

Na Maine Signal Dekha
Na toone signal Dekha
Accident Ho Gaya raba Rabaaa....

and before I go :

Hum dono Kamere Mai Bund Hoooo........
..................Aur Chabee Kho Jai

Freinds this is culture, this is real poetry, arent you glad I introduced you to the finer things in life?
Stud.

[Cinderella]

Stud ji ,
This is for u
Na Toata Na Toati Na Toatai Ke Par
Ae Ol-Loo Ke Pathay To Shairy Na Kar

just kidding.....
aap ka zawq tu bahut aala hai,I never have seen such a great Shairy in my life Wow!
So keep sending ur Aala Shairy...I enjoy it

Ahsaas Ke Andaaz Badal Jatai Hai Warna
Anchal bhi Osi Taar se Banta Hai Kafan Bha

Chand Badla Hai Kabhi Jheel Badal Janai Se
Aeena Koi Bhi Ho Aks Tomhara Hoga

Suntai Hai Ke Har Chees Milti Hai Dua Se
Ek Rooz Tumhai Mang Ke Dekhai Gai Khuda se

Till next time
Allah Hafiz
Cinderella