Please complete this sher!!

[ullu]

I am writing a poem to impress a girl. After 3 days of thinking, I could come with first line, please complete second line and help me.

Woh aayi lekar car, main khada tha bekaar

[kohal]

Uska chehra dekayy, ho gaya iqrar

[Clementine]

Wah wah wah!!

Kohal, Mukarar!!
Irshad!!

[ChannMahi]

usska chehra dekh kar, dill ho gaya beqarar.
main naacha
main jhooma
main gayea ...o meri mehbooba aa aa aaaa
abh aisey na mujhe taRphaa a a a aaa aaaa

abh jaao jaa kar gao yeh....teri baat bann jayegi

[Clementine]

Chann ji, ullu ne sher mukamal karnay ko kaha tha, gana ganay ko nahien..

[hayaa]

lol! kohal...chuppi rustam!


Woh aayi lekar car, main khada tha bekaar
mainay lift maangi, uss nay kiya inkaar


or

Woh aayi lekar car, main khada tha bekaar
tangay say phissal ker mai huwa barra khuwaar

[hayaa]

haey Allah

chann ji...khair tay hay??

[ChannMahi]

bacho...woh zamana gaya jabh laRkiyaN ashiq ke aik dou ghassay piTay shairoN pe qurban ho jaati thi......abh poora gaana gaana parhta hai, naach kood kar.

Hayaa ji disco ka zamana hai disco ka... lekin aap apni kitaabeiN chhoRheiN tou pata chale.

ChannMahi - Disco King

[Gola Gunda]

Ppl. No Advertising , JUst an attempt to complete the shair

Woh Aee Lai Kai Car Main Kharra Thha Baikar
US Nai KHilaya Mujhai Churan ,MUjhai Aaee Faurun Dikar

Woh Aaee Lai Kai CAr , MAin Kharra Thha Baikar
Woh Clinton KI driver ,MAin Parchoon Ka dukandaar

[hayaa]

chann veer ji, paabi ji kitthay honday naiN ajj kal? ask her if she needs another supply of bailnaas?

gal mairi kitaabaan nun chaddan di naee hay chann ji, kitaabaan mennu naee chadd-diyaan.
waiasy, assi sab vi tay kitabaan ee aaN


p.s. change ur nick to DJ Disco-jatt

[This message has been edited by hayaa (edited August 30, 2000).]

[kaka malang]

Woh Aaee Lai Kai CAr , MAin Kharra Thha Baikar , gare se mara usne mujhe sarak par, aindan mein nehi karon ga shakar

[Lamba]

Woh aayi lekar car, main khada tha bekaar
meine oos ka keya deedar, eisa laga ho geya pyar
roki oos ne apni car, mera dil hu'a bekaraar,
ja ke oos ke pass mein ne kaha bar bar, tuhee he mere dil key sitaar (??)
gaur se mujhe ko dekh kar, bol ne lagee ullu ja pehle kuch pur!! ?!?!

[Rarediamonds & Gold]

Woh aayi lekar car, main khada tha bekaar
Jhanjana'ay dil kay taar,
Ankh pharkay baar baar,
Yaar ho ja hoshiyaar,
Warna paray gi zoar ki maar.

[Digital-Grrl]

Hahahahahahahah ... Funnyyyyyyyyyyy!!
I really wish i cud help.. but ummm.. well m awful at shairi n stuff.. but after readin all thoze shairs.. i cudn't help myself .. so here goes nuthin ! ...

Woh aayi lekar car, main khada tha bekaar
uss say lift mangi, takay hojain faraar
kissi aisi duniya main, jahan koi na bekaar
buss aik main hoon, or mera pyaar !

http://www3.pak.org/gupshup/smilies/hula.gif ..... Stay Kool !



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[NYAhmadiX]

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