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    Jab mere ishq ko tere dard kii rahnumaai na thii

    kuchh samay pahle ye ghazal likhii thii main ne..
    I will be waiting for your valuable feedback which really inspirs me a lot...

    Jab mere ishq ko tere dard kii rahnumaai na thii
    Mere dil ne aisii choT kabhee khaaii na thii

    Barish ki bundoN meiN gar tere ashq ki tapish ho
    Oos saal maine bhii phir eid manaayee na thii

    Bahot majboor tha wo shaksh jo tujh se juda hua
    oos kii zaat mein warna kaheeN bewafaai na thii

    ujaDe aashiyeiN pe ab kyoN nashaad hai tu dil
    ye aag kisi aur ne to lagaaii na thii

    aaj khafa ho kii maiN manziloN se bhatkaa hooN
    sahii raah tumne bhii to mujhee dikhaaii na thii

    chaand es dunia meiN misaal e husn rahe
    zulf yehi soNch rukh se oos ne hataii na thii

    #2
    Lovely... khoobsorat alfaz bohat khobsorti se use kiye hain aapnay...
    very deep and touchy...
    keep writing...

    and thanks for sharing with us

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      #3
      very nice
      ache koshish hay

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        #4
        Re: Jab mere ishq ko tere dard kii rahnumaai na thii


        Originally posted by Pramod:

        Jab mere ishq ko tere dard kii rahnumaai na thii
        Mere dil ne aisii choT kabhee khaaii na thii

        Bahot majboor tha wo shaksh jo tujh se juda hua
        oos kii zaat mein warna kaheeN bewafaai na thii

        ujaDe aashiyeiN pe ab kyoN nashaad hai tu dil
        ye aag kisi aur ne to lagaaii na thii

        aaj khafa ho kii maiN manziloN se bhatkaa hooN
        sahii raah tumne bhii to mujhee dikhaaii na thii

        chaand es dunia meiN misaal e husn rahe
        zulf yehi soNch rukh se oos ne hataii na thii



        Pramod bohat khoobsoorat ghazal hey It's
        really nice to read it. Thanx a lot for sharing with us
        Reh gaya kaam hamaara hi baghawat likhna...

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          #5
          bhut khoob pramod bhai thxs 4 sharing

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            #6
            very nice really very nice....
            _______________________________________
            Hijar main khoon rulatay ho kahaan hotay hoo
            Loat kar koyoon nahi atay hoo kahan hotay hoo

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              #7
              ujaDe aashiyeiN pe ab kyoN nashaad hai tu dil
              ye aag kisi aur ne to lagaaii na thii

              aaj khafa ho kii maiN manziloN se bhatkaa hooN
              sahii raah tumne bhii to mujhee dikhaaii na thii


              bohat acha likha haye aap ne.. :-)

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                #8
                bohat khoob pramod gi
                thanko for sharing :-)
                your lips are keep moving .
                but all i hear is... Blah Blah Blah

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                  #9
                  a beautiful ghazal..buhat achhi koshish hai
                  keep up the good work

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                    #10
                    Originally posted by P}{mϧt:
                    Lovely... khoobsorat alfaz bohat khobsorti se use kiye hain aapnay...
                    very deep and touchy...
                    keep writing...

                    and thanks for sharing with us
                    Thanks a lot P}{mϧt for your inspiring words.

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                      #11
                      Re: Re: Jab mere ishq ko tere dard kii rahnumaai na thii

                      Originally posted by Amal:





                      Pramod bohat khoobsoorat ghazal hey It's
                      really nice to read it. Thanx a lot for sharing with us
                      Thanks a lot Amal. Any good word from a really good shaayar of your kind boosts my confidence a lot.

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                        #12
                        honsla afzaai ke liye aap sabon ka bahot bahot shukriya ameen,nikki,Dilsay,hanie,chaand jii and weteyes82.

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                          #13
                          Re: Jab mere ishq ko tere dard kii rahnumaai na thii

                          Originally posted by Pramod:


                          Bahot majboor tha wo shaksh jo tujh se juda hua
                          oos kii zaat mein warna kaheeN bewafaai na thii

                          bohat khoob thanks 4 sharin Pra g..
                          ~mujhaY kis jurm ki saza mili k meRi rooh taak hai thaki huwi
                          maiN apni jaga se hila nahi meRi saans phiR be ukhaR gaye~

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                            #14
                            yeah its realy nice bohoot khoob

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                              #15
                              Re: Jab mere ishq ko tere dard kii rahnumaai na thii

                              Originally posted by Pramod:
                              kuchh samay pahle ye ghazal likhii thii main ne..
                              I will be waiting for your valuable feedback which really inspirs me a lot...

                              Bahot majboor tha wo shaksh jo tujh se juda hua
                              oos kii zaat mein warna kaheeN bewafaai na thii

                              ujaDe aashiyeiN pe ab kyoN nashaad hai tu dil
                              ye aag kisi aur ne to lagaaii na thii

                              aaj khafa ho kii maiN manziloN se bhatkaa hooN
                              sahii raah tumne bhii to mujhee dikhaaii na thii
                              Beautiful, keep it up and Thanks for sharing :-)
                              .....................................
                              Hum ney kaantoN ko bhi narmii sey chuhwaa hey aksar
                              log be-dard heiN PhooloN ko massal detay heiN

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