Jab mere ishq ko tere dard kii rahnumaai na thii

[Pramod]

kuchh samay pahle ye ghazal likhii thii main ne..
I will be waiting for your valuable feedback which really inspirs me a lot...

Jab mere ishq ko tere dard kii rahnumaai na thii
Mere dil ne aisii choT kabhee khaaii na thii

Barish ki bundoN meiN gar tere ashq ki tapish ho
Oos saal maine bhii phir eid manaayee na thii

Bahot majboor tha wo shaksh jo tujh se juda hua
oos kii zaat mein warna kaheeN bewafaai na thii

ujaDe aashiyeiN pe ab kyoN nashaad hai tu dil
ye aag kisi aur ne to lagaaii na thii

aaj khafa ho kii maiN manziloN se bhatkaa hooN
sahii raah tumne bhii to mujhee dikhaaii na thii

chaand es dunia meiN misaal e husn rahe
zulf yehi soNch rukh se oos ne hataii na thii

[Philanthrope]

Lovely... khoobsorat alfaz bohat khobsorti se use kiye hain aapnay...
very deep and touchy...
keep writing...

and thanks for sharing with us

[ameen]

very nice
ache koshish hay

[Amal]

Re: Jab mere ishq ko tere dard kii rahnumaai na thii

Originally posted by Pramod:

Jab mere ishq ko tere dard kii rahnumaai na thii
Mere dil ne aisii choT kabhee khaaii na thii

Bahot majboor tha wo shaksh jo tujh se juda hua
oos kii zaat mein warna kaheeN bewafaai na thii

ujaDe aashiyeiN pe ab kyoN nashaad hai tu dil
ye aag kisi aur ne to lagaaii na thii

aaj khafa ho kii maiN manziloN se bhatkaa hooN
sahii raah tumne bhii to mujhee dikhaaii na thii

chaand es dunia meiN misaal e husn rahe
zulf yehi soNch rukh se oos ne hataii na thii

Pramod bohat khoobsoorat ghazal hey It's
really nice to read it. Thanx a lot for sharing with us

[nikii]

bhut khoob pramod bhai thxs 4 sharing

[Dilsay]

very nice really very nice....

[hanie]

ujaDe aashiyeiN pe ab kyoN nashaad hai tu dil
ye aag kisi aur ne to lagaaii na thii

aaj khafa ho kii maiN manziloN se bhatkaa hooN
sahii raah tumne bhii to mujhee dikhaaii na thii

bohat acha likha haye aap ne.. :-)

[chand_chehra]

bohat khoob pramod gi
thanko for sharing :-)

[weteyes82]

a beautiful ghazal..buhat achhi koshish hai
keep up the good work

[Pramod]

Originally posted by P}{ä®mä©Ï§t:
Lovely... khoobsorat alfaz bohat khobsorti se use kiye hain aapnay...
very deep and touchy...
keep writing...

and thanks for sharing with us

Thanks a lot P}{ä®mä©Ï§t for your inspiring words.

[Pramod]

Re: Re: Jab mere ishq ko tere dard kii rahnumaai na thii

Originally posted by Amal:





Pramod bohat khoobsoorat ghazal hey It's
really nice to read it. Thanx a lot for sharing with us

Thanks a lot Amal. Any good word from a really good shaayar of your kind boosts my confidence a lot.

[Pramod]

honsla afzaai ke liye aap sabon ka bahot bahot shukriya ameen,nikki,Dilsay,hanie,chaand jii and weteyes82.

[NikamiJano]

Re: Jab mere ishq ko tere dard kii rahnumaai na thii

Originally posted by Pramod:


Bahot majboor tha wo shaksh jo tujh se juda hua
oos kii zaat mein warna kaheeN bewafaai na thii

bohat khoob thanks 4 sharin Pra g..

[ullujii]

yeah its realy nice bohoot khoob

[GuL-e-Tasbeeh]

Re: Jab mere ishq ko tere dard kii rahnumaai na thii

Originally posted by Pramod:
kuchh samay pahle ye ghazal likhii thii main ne..
I will be waiting for your valuable feedback which really inspirs me a lot...

Bahot majboor tha wo shaksh jo tujh se juda hua
oos kii zaat mein warna kaheeN bewafaai na thii

ujaDe aashiyeiN pe ab kyoN nashaad hai tu dil
ye aag kisi aur ne to lagaaii na thii

aaj khafa ho kii maiN manziloN se bhatkaa hooN
sahii raah tumne bhii to mujhee dikhaaii na thii

Beautiful, keep it up and Thanks for sharing :-)