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    ~Shakki Larki~



    Main soochtee hoon
    tayra mohabbat say paish aana
    mayray gamoun pay udaas hona
    mayree khushee main shareek hona
    main rooth jaaoon, mujhay manana
    mayree kitaboun main phool rakhna
    mayray leeyay shair kehna
    kaheen tayree aadatain hi na hoon
    main shakee larkee tou aysee hoon k
    kaheen bhi tayree mohabatoun main
    kami hoe tou...
    main tujh say shikwah kiye bina
    tamam bandhan hi tour doun gi
    koe waja naheen sounoo gee

    #2
    Re: ~Shakki Larki~

    Originally posted by P}{mϧt:


    Mian soochtee hoon
    tayra mohabbat say paish aana
    mayray gamoun pay udaas hona
    mayree khushee main shareek hona
    main rooth jaaoon, mujhay manana
    mayree kitaboun main phool rakhna
    mayray leeyay shair kehna
    kaheen tayree aadatain hi na hoon
    main shakee larkee tou aysee hoon k
    kaheen bhi tayree mohabatoun main
    kami hoe tou...
    main tujh say shikwah kiye bina
    tamam bandhan hi tour doun gi
    koe waja naheen sounoo gee
    Wah Again you and your choice....Superb, zabardast
    thanks for sharing
    I make others feel like winners

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      #3
      pharma, u gotta neat choice in poetry na

      I said na

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        #4
        Re: ~Shakki Larki~

        Originally posted by P}{mϧt:


        Mian soochtee hoon
        tayra mohabbat say paish aana
        mayray gamoun pay udaas hona
        mayree khushee main shareek hona
        main rooth jaaoon, mujhay manana
        mayree kitaboun main phool rakhna
        mayray leeyay shair kehna
        kaheen tayree aadatain hi na hoon
        main shakee larkee tou aysee hoon k
        kaheen bhi tayree mohabatoun main
        kami hoe tou...
        main tujh say shikwah kiye bina
        tamam bandhan hi tour doun gi
        koe waja naheen sounoo gee
        Buhat khoobsurat nazm hai magar shakkee larkee ko apne shak kahtam karne chahiyein
        Mere junoon ka na lo imtihaan,
        Jaanan

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          #5
          @ Man de Mouj... Thanks a lot ...thats a compliment for me

          @ Seema.... Thanks na

          @ Capricorn...hmm Shukriya

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            #6
            bhoot khoob

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              #7
              itnaa shuk kernaa achha nahi hotaa...aur kabhi kabhi ziyaada aitmaad bhi merwaa daitaa hai...kher, a nice contribution..parh k achha laga

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                #8
                niceeeeeeeeeee

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                  #9
                  Waha waha.....
                  _______________________________________
                  Hijar main khoon rulatay ho kahaan hotay hoo
                  Loat kar koyoon nahi atay hoo kahan hotay hoo

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                    #10
                    Re: ~Shakki Larki~
                    • Originally posted by P}{mϧt:


                      Mian soochtee hoon
                      tayra mohabbat say paish aana
                      mayray gamoun pay udaas hona
                      mayree khushee main shareek hona
                      main rooth jaaoon, mujhay manana
                      mayree kitaboun main phool rakhna
                      mayray leeyay shair kehna
                      kaheen tayree aadatain hi na hoon
                      main shakee larkee tou aysee hoon k
                      kaheen bhi tayree mohabatoun main
                      kami hoe tou...
                      main tujh say shikwah kiye bina
                      tamam bandhan hi tour doun gi
                      koe waja naheen sounoo gee


                    Yeh shakki laRRki bahut mohabbat karnay waali hay

                    dil-O-jaan say mohabbat karnaa bhee khuloos kee nishaani hay...


                    Allah humm subb ko shakki banaaey
                    - Representing Gadhays of Religion and Pakistan Affair Forums -

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                      #11
                      Re: Re: ~Shakki Larki~

                      Originally posted by Gadha: [list]Originally posted by P}{mϧt:

                      Yeh shakki laRRki bahut mohabbat karnay waali hay

                      dil-O-jaan say mohabbat karnaa bhee khuloos kee nishaani hay...


                      Allah humm subb ko shakki banaaey
                      Mere junoon ka na lo imtihaan,
                      Jaanan

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                        #12
                        Re: ~Shakki Larki~

                        Originally posted by P}{mϧt:


                        Mian soochtee hoon

                        Mere junoon ka na lo imtihaan,
                        Jaanan

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                          #13
                          Originally posted by Capricorn:

                          abbay kiyaa har lafz kaa post martum karay gaa

                          yaar: everyone of us actaully should describe the piece of poetry posted according to our understanding rather than just formal 'nice, bahut khoob, zabar10' qism kay reply.. hay naa? what do u think?
                          - Representing Gadhays of Religion and Pakistan Affair Forums -

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                            #14
                            Originally posted by Gadha:
                            abbay kiyaa har lafz kaa post martum karay gaa

                            yaar: everyone of us actaully should describe the piece of poetry posted according to our understanding rather than just formal 'nice, bahut khoob, zabar10' qism kay reply.. hay naa? what do u think?
                            Sahee kaha, hamein appreciate karne ke liye apne words use karne chahiyein farakhdilee se magar pata hai yahan agar kuch likho to koi appreciation naheen miltee. This is poetry section na to yahan par log ghalat matalb bhee nikaal lete :roleyes:

                            Rahee baat post martum kanre kee to woh to mein karoonga, Capricorn jo thehra
                            Mere junoon ka na lo imtihaan,
                            Jaanan

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                              #15
                              Originally posted by Capricorn:


                              Sahee kaha, hamein appreciate karne ke liye apne words use karne chahiyein farakhdilee se magar pata hai yahan agar kuch likho to koi appreciation naheen miltee. This is poetry section na to yahan par log ghalat matalb bhee nikaal lete :roleyes:

                              Rahee baat post martum kanre kee to woh to mein karoonga, Capricorn jo thehra
                              jhot nehe bolte meree post pe to serf anghoota bana dete ho
                              :crying:

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