~Shakki Larki~

[Philanthrope]

Main soochtee hoon
tayra mohabbat say paish aana
mayray gamoun pay udaas hona
mayree khushee main shareek hona
main rooth jaaoon, mujhay manana
mayree kitaboun main phool rakhna
mayray leeyay shair kehna
kaheen tayree aadatain hi na hoon
main shakee larkee tou aysee hoon k
kaheen bhi tayree mohabatoun main
kami hoe tou...
main tujh say shikwah kiye bina
tamam bandhan hi tour doun gi
koe waja naheen sounoo gee

[Man de Mouj]

Re: ~Shakki Larki~

Originally posted by P}{ä®mä©Ï§t:


Mian soochtee hoon
tayra mohabbat say paish aana
mayray gamoun pay udaas hona
mayree khushee main shareek hona
main rooth jaaoon, mujhay manana
mayree kitaboun main phool rakhna
mayray leeyay shair kehna
kaheen tayree aadatain hi na hoon
main shakee larkee tou aysee hoon k
kaheen bhi tayree mohabatoun main
kami hoe tou...
main tujh say shikwah kiye bina
tamam bandhan hi tour doun gi
koe waja naheen sounoo gee

Wah Again you and your choice....Superb, zabardast
thanks for sharing

[Simply Seema]

pharma, u gotta neat choice in poetry na

[Capricorn]

Re: ~Shakki Larki~

Originally posted by P}{ä®mä©Ï§t:


Mian soochtee hoon
tayra mohabbat say paish aana
mayray gamoun pay udaas hona
mayree khushee main shareek hona
main rooth jaaoon, mujhay manana
mayree kitaboun main phool rakhna
mayray leeyay shair kehna
kaheen tayree aadatain hi na hoon
main shakee larkee tou aysee hoon k
kaheen bhi tayree mohabatoun main
kami hoe tou...
main tujh say shikwah kiye bina
tamam bandhan hi tour doun gi
koe waja naheen sounoo gee

Buhat khoobsurat nazm hai magar shakkee larkee ko apne shak kahtam karne chahiyein

[Philanthrope]

@ Man de Mouj... Thanks a lot ...thats a compliment for me

@ Seema.... Thanks na

@ Capricorn...hmm Shukriya

[ullujii]

bhoot khoob

[weteyes82]

itnaa shuk kernaa achha nahi hotaa...aur kabhi kabhi ziyaada aitmaad bhi merwaa daitaa hai...kher, a nice contribution..parh k achha laga

[ghazal kisi ke]

niceeeeeeeeeee

[Dilsay]

Waha waha.....

[Gadha]

Re: ~Shakki Larki~

• Originally posted by P}{ä®mä©Ï§t:
  
  
  Mian soochtee hoon
  tayra mohabbat say paish aana
  mayray gamoun pay udaas hona
  mayree khushee main shareek hona
  main rooth jaaoon, mujhay manana
  mayree kitaboun main phool rakhna
  mayray leeyay shair kehna
  kaheen tayree aadatain hi na hoon
  main shakee larkee tou aysee hoon k
  kaheen bhi tayree mohabatoun main
  kami hoe tou...
  main tujh say shikwah kiye bina
  tamam bandhan hi tour doun gi
  koe waja naheen sounoo gee
  

Yeh shakki laRRki bahut mohabbat karnay waali hay

dil-O-jaan say mohabbat karnaa bhee khuloos kee nishaani hay...


Allah humm subb ko shakki banaaey

[Capricorn]

Re: Re: ~Shakki Larki~

Originally posted by Gadha: [list]Originally posted by P}{ä®mä©Ï§t:

Yeh shakki laRRki bahut mohabbat karnay waali hay

dil-O-jaan say mohabbat karnaa bhee khuloos kee nishaani hay...


Allah humm subb ko shakki banaaey

[Capricorn]

Re: ~Shakki Larki~

Originally posted by P}{ä®mä©Ï§t:


Mian soochtee hoon

[Gadha]

Originally posted by Capricorn:

abbay kiyaa har lafz kaa post martum karay gaa

yaar: everyone of us actaully should describe the piece of poetry posted according to our understanding rather than just formal 'nice, bahut khoob, zabar10' qism kay reply.. hay naa? what do u think?

[Capricorn]

Originally posted by Gadha:
abbay kiyaa har lafz kaa post martum karay gaa

yaar: everyone of us actaully should describe the piece of poetry posted according to our understanding rather than just formal 'nice, bahut khoob, zabar10' qism kay reply.. hay naa? what do u think?

Sahee kaha, hamein appreciate karne ke liye apne words use karne chahiyein farakhdilee se magar pata hai yahan agar kuch likho to koi appreciation naheen miltee. This is poetry section na to yahan par log ghalat matalb bhee nikaal lete :roleyes:

Rahee baat post martum kanre kee to woh to mein karoonga, Capricorn jo thehra

[*Masoom Muskaan*]

Originally posted by Capricorn:


Sahee kaha, hamein appreciate karne ke liye apne words use karne chahiyein farakhdilee se magar pata hai yahan agar kuch likho to koi appreciation naheen miltee. This is poetry section na to yahan par log ghalat matalb bhee nikaal lete :roleyes:

Rahee baat post martum kanre kee to woh to mein karoonga, Capricorn jo thehra

jhot nehe bolte meree post pe to serf anghoota bana dete ho