Oos shaksh meiN aisii baat kya hai

[Pramod]

chhoTe bahar kii ye ghazal aaj hii puri kii hai maine...soncha aap logon se share karooN...

ye zindagii kii bisaat kya hai
jeet kya hai aur maat kya hai

Dil meiN sharaarat,aankh meiN aaNsoo
Tum hi kaho ye , jazbaat kya hai

wafaa ne hii tujhe bewafaa banaaya
Warna terii, auqaat kya hai

nafratoN meiN bhii rahta hai meri
Oos shaksh meiN aisii baat kya hai

Meri peeth aur tera khanzar
Dosti meiN ye saugaat kya hai

mere liye Jab uThaaya hai patthar
To phir ye jhijhak , ye ihtiyaat kya ha

[Bhooli Bisri]

pramod ji bahut umdah kavish hai apki.

[Dragon~King]

buhat khoob

[nikii]

bhut khoob parmod ji

[Amal]

Re: Oos shaksh meiN aisii baat kya hai

Originally posted by Pramod:
chhoTe bahar kii ye ghazal aaj hii puri kii

Meri peeth aur tera khanzar
Dosti meiN ye saugaat kya hai

mere liye Jab uThaaya hai patthar
To phir ye jhijhak , ye ihtiyaat kya ha

Bohat khoob Pramod...keep it up

[Guest]

bohat khoob,

[Pramod]

honsla afzaai ke liye aap saboN ka bahot bahot shukriya
Bhooli Bisari,D King,nikki, Amal and *** Vivacious ***

[chand_chehra]

Nice pramod gi

[~Nazish~]

bohat khoob :-)

mujhe nahi pata tha ke aap bhee likhte hain aur acha khasa likhte hain.

[Capricorn]

Re: Oos shaksh meiN aisii baat kya hai

Originally posted by Pramod:
mere liye Jab uThaaya hai patthar
To phir ye jhijhak , ye ihtiyaat kya ha

Now this contains poetic philosophy. I appreciate ur work Pramod

[Koyal]

nice one Pram je....thanks 4 sharing per ap ko tu poetry main sirf Nikami,chand,aur amal he nazar atey aur kbhi kisi ki post dekhi taak nahi

[Pramod]

Shukriya Chaand jii.....

[Pramod]

Originally posted by ~Nazish~:
bohat khoob :-)

mujhe nahi pata tha ke aap bhee likhte hain aur acha khasa likhte hain.

haaN zara tukbandiii kar lete haiN...
waise GS pe hamesha maine apnii he creations post kii hai...aap logon kii honsla azaai se thoda confidence mil jaata hai.....

bahot bahot shukriya aap ka Nazish jii....

[Pramod]

Re: Re: Oos shaksh meiN aisii baat kya hai

Originally posted by Capricorn:

Now this contains poetic philosophy. I appreciate ur work Pramod

Thanks for your appriciation, Capricorn. These words will go a long way with me.

[Pramod]

Originally posted by Koyal:
nice one Pram je....thanks 4 sharing per ap ko tu poetry main sirf Nikami,chand,aur amal he nazar atey aur kbhi kisi ki post dekhi taak nahi

sab se pahle to ghazal pasand karne aur daad dene ke liye bahot bahot shukriya Koyal jii....
ab rahii aap ki shikaayat kii baat to kuchh had tak aap theek kahti haiN..meri problem ye hai ke mujhe sirf ghazaleiN samajh mein aati haiN aur mostly I like to appriciate the shaayar. es forum par maximum log kisi aur shaayar kii creations post karte haiN..jo yaa to maine padhii hoti hai ya phir I appriciate the shaayar....Amal sahab bahot achha likhte hain..oonkii creations se mujhe khud kuchh seekhne ko milta hai...

Nikami Bahna aur Chand jii mostly ghazals post karti hain aur oon kii choice....REALLY GREAT...aur ye na naaje kahaaN se ghazaleiN dhoodh ke laati haiN..most of the times maine nahin padhee hoti hai..

These are the reasons..but ab main koshish karoonga ke aap ko ye shikaayat kam rahe mujh se.....