Aik shair - test kay liyay

[who---me]

Humnay uni yadon main...ro ro kay drum bhar diyay
wo bay wafa ayee....aur naha kar chal diyay...

..Shukriya shukriya




Hunay changed to Humnay for clarification purposes ... we techies should not come here ... :-)

[schahzad]

plz upgrade to Administrator of poetic technologies!

[CareBear]

wah wah

[chand_chehra]

hamra bhi glass bharnay wala tha poetry forum ki yaad main

[Gadha]

katoray bharo yaa drum bharo
sazaa hay yehi badd-zoqi-e-ijmaal kee
tum par loug fiqray kassain
baat ho jubb aalaa iqtedaar kee

[Azad]

Originally posted by Gadha:
katoray bharo yaa drum bharo
sazaa hay yehi badd-zoqi-e-ijmaal kee
tum par loug fiqray kassain
baat ho jubb aalaa iqtedaar kee

[~Nazish~]

Re: Aik shair - test kay liyay

Originally posted by who---me:
Humnay uni yadon main...ro ro kay drum bhar diyay
wo bay wafa ayee....aur naha kar chal diyay...

..Shukriya shukriya




Hunay changed to Humnay for clarification purposes ... we techies should not come here ... :-)

who me aur poetry main?
wese, good to see you wasting time here

bohat aala zoq paya hai

[~Nazish~]

Originally posted by Gadha:
katoray bharo yaa drum bharo
sazaa hay yehi badd-zoqi-e-ijmaal kee
tum par loug fiqray kassain
baat ho jubb aalaa iqtedaar kee

LOL

[~*Suraj*~]

nice
and I dont' think so poetry is a wastage of time...

[Sehar]

who---me

Please stay away, as far as possible, from Poetry. Aap ka hum sab pe bara ahsan ho ga.

[Capricorn]

Re: Aik shair - test kay liyay

Originally posted by who---me:
Humnay uni yadon main...ro ro kay drum bhar diyay
wo bay wafa ayee....aur naha kar chal diyay...

..Shukriya shukriya




Hunay changed to Humnay for clarification purposes ... we techies should not come here ... :-)

Pls change "uni" to "unki" for further clarification

[hayaa]

mukarrar mukarrar

[Gadha]

Originally posted by Azad:

dou dou thengay kioun dikhaatay ho bhai

aik kaafi nahin thaa?

oh acchaa samjhaa doosray wala meray liyeh "thumb up" thaa.. bahut accha kiyaa pehlay walaa who---me par bilkul custom fit huvaa hay

[Dania]

Originally posted by Gadha:
katoray bharo yaa drum bharo
sazaa hay yehi badd-zoqi-e-ijmaal kee
tum par loug fiqray kassain
baat ho jubb aalaa iqtedaar kee

gadha bhi chota hogaya