yuuN ashak tapash lay k meRi ankh se niqalY..

[chand_chehra]

[i]


phiR teeR usi shakas ne maRa tha jigaaR maiN
sheehcay kki tarha jis ko utara tha jigaR maiN

ahsaas maiN khulnaY lagay khushboo k dreechaY
dhaRkan ki taRha koi pukaRa tha jigaR maiN

awaaz k gunchaY yunhi khaamoosh nahi theY
ik baRaf ki sill jesa chaRara tha jigaR maiN

kis kaRab sehaR tashna dahaN dekh raha tha
taptaY huwey sehaRa'oN ka para tha jigaR maiN

yuuN ashak tapash lay k meRi ankh se niqalY..
jesaY koi phighla huwa taRa tha jigaR maiN

[NikamiJano]

Re: yuuN ashak tapash lay k meRi ankh se niqalY..

Originally posted by chand_chehra:
[i]


phiR teeR usi shakas ne maRa tha jigaaR maiN
sheeshay kki tarha jis ko utara tha jigaR maiN

ahsaas maiN khulnaY lagay khushboo k dreechaY
dhaRkan ki taRha koi pukaRa tha jigaR maiN

bohat khoob chando g thanks 4 sharin...
ap ka sher par k hamin apni dharkaN ki yaad a gaye

[Amal]

Re: yuuN ashak tapash lay k meRi ankh se niqalY..

Originally posted by chand_chehra:
[i]

ahsaas maiN khulnaY lagay khushboo k dreechaY
dhaRkan ki taRha koi pukaRa tha jigaR maiN

yuuN ashak tapash lay k meRi ankh se niqalY..
jesaY koi phighla huwa taRa tha jigaR maiN

Beautiful choice CC...thanx for sharing

[~Nazish~]

yuuN ashak tapash lay k meRi ankh se niqalY..
jesaY koi phighla huwa taRa tha jigaR maiN

excellent

[ghazal kisi ke]

Re: yuuN ashak tapash lay k meRi ankh se niqalY..

Originally posted by chand_chehra:
[i]


phiR teeR usi shakas ne maRa tha jigaaR maiN
sheehcay kki tarha jis ko utara tha jigaR maiN

ahsaas maiN khulnaY lagay khushboo k dreechaY
dhaRkan ki taRha koi pukaRa tha jigaR maiN

excellent choice
thanks

[WiseGuy]

Re: yuuN ashak tapash lay k meRi ankh se niqalY..

Originally posted by chand_chehra:
[i]


phiR teeR usi shakas ne maRa tha jigaaR maiN
sheehcay kki tarha jis ko utara tha jigaR maiN

ahsaas maiN khulnaY lagay khushboo k dreechaY
dhaRkan ki taRha koi pukaRa tha jigaR maiN

awaaz k gunchaY yunhi khaamoosh nahi theY
ik baRaf ki sill jesa chaRara tha jigaR maiN

kis kaRab sehaR tashna dahaN dekh raha tha
taptaY huwey sehaRa'oN ka para tha jigaR maiN

yuuN ashak tapash lay k meRi ankh se niqalY..
jesaY koi phighla huwa taRa tha jigaR maiN

Bohat Khoob! Chando Jee...
Thanks for sharing!

[Dilsay]

Very nice...

[Azad]

yuuN ashak tapash lay k meRi ankh se niqalY..
jesaY koi phighla huwa taRa tha jigaR maiN


Wah

[Guest7777]

nice work chand

[weteyes82]

*yuuN ashak tapash lay k meRi ankh se niqalY..
jesaY koi phighla huwa taRa tha jigaR maiN*

nice

naa chandaa naa..itna zulm nahin kerte jiger k saath.. ye bhi koio khelne kii cheez hai..chalo dil tak to thik tha....jigar ko to baksh diya hota.. ab daikho bhala aisee zaalim logon ko jigar mein utaar liyyaa hai koi baat bhala...mashwara hii kiytaa hota hamse..

well in short nice choice.

[Eastern Thoughts]

Great People Great Choice

[Guest]

bohat khoob, beautiful

[chand_chehra]

thanks every1

[chand_chehra]

Originally posted by weteyes82:
*yuuN ashak tapash lay k meRi ankh se niqalY..
jesaY koi phighla huwa taRa tha jigaR maiN*

nice

naa chandaa naa..itna zulm nahin kerte jiger k saath.. ye bhi koio khelne kii cheez hai..chalo dil tak to thik tha....jigar ko to baksh diya hota.. ab daikho bhala aisee zaalim logon ko jigar mein utaar liyyaa hai koi baat bhala...mashwara hii kiytaa hota hamse..

well in short nice choice.

dil becharay par pahlay hi bohat zulm hogya tha hum nay socha
usko rest dillain

wasay agarmujhay pata hota kay ap kaha payejatay to zaroor mashwara karlati

[nikii]

bhut khoob chandoo