Koi tu guftagoo karoo

[WiseGuy]

Koi tu guftagoo karoo, sham bohat uddas hai
Tum meray pass hi raho, sham bohat uddas hai

Kuch bhi tu boltay nahi, khuaf ye toRtay nahi
Main nay kaha zara sunoo, sham bohat uddas hai

Mujh say na tum miloo gay magar, mujh say na kuch kahoo magar
Sham say aa kar kuch kahoo, sham bohat uddas hai

Dekho bohat hai ranjeedah, ummar rawa ki dastan
Iss maiN na aur dukh bharo, sham bohat uddas hai

Itna hai iztiraab kyN, karb maiN haiN janab kyN
Milna hai gar tu aa milo, sham bohat uddas hai

Mana ka tum khafa nahi, kehnay ko kuch bacha nahi
Acha sa shair hi parho, sham bohat uddas hai

Koi nahi idhar udhar, saray khamosh bam-o-dar
Kis say kahaiN dua karo, sham bohat uddas hai

Kuch tu ilaaj e gum karo, sabr e khasta jaaN sunoo
Aaj kisi ko khatt likho, sham bohat uddas hai

[Dilsay]

you said thanks in advance... what can we say you welcome....

it is nice anyway...

[Azad]

Wah jee Wah

[WiseGuy]

Originally posted by Dilsay:
you said thanks in advance... what can we say you welcome....

it is nice anyway...

I said thanks in advance, cuz I knew you gonna like it...
Anyways Thank you very much

[WiseGuy]

Originally posted by Azad:
Wah jee Wah

Shukriya Azad ji

[Azad]

kia khoob
wah
......
lajawab posting yani aik say bharr kar aik ... jitni bhi tareef ki jay kam hay

[*Masoom Muskaan*]

boht khob

[Koyal]

sham bohat udas hai

[WiseGuy]

Originally posted by *Masoom Muskaan*:
boht khob

Thanks

[WiseGuy]

Originally posted by Koyal:
sham bohat udas hai

Bohat dinon say mera dil udas hai Mohsin
Is ainay to koee akas ab naya donga

[chand_chehra]

udasian basabab nahi hain
Nice gazal WG

[Rabia Chaudhry]

Wah Wah!!!!!! kool poem haaaaan i like it Dhimpak

[guybrush]

good one

[WiseGuy]

Originally posted by chand_chehra:
udasian basabab nahi hain
Nice gazal WG

Thanks Chando Ji, but you missed my post, like 2 months ago...
Khair dair aayed durust aayed... Its never too late.. hey na

[WiseGuy]

Originally posted by Rabia Chaudhry:
Wah Wah!!!!!! kool poem haaaaan i like it Dhimpak

Thanks Rabia
I like that DHIMPAK