is sooch per amal k magaR hoslay nahi

[Paglee]

lamhaY wo aiyeN gaiN jo ab taak sunay nahi
wo dard tum saho gaye jo hum ne shahay nahi

in sabaz moasmooN maiN kareN kis pe aytabaaR?
paat-jhar rutooN k zakham be ab taak bharay nahi

barsoN se sochtey hiaN k tujhay bhool jaien hum
is sooch per amal k magaR hoslay nahi

wo kam naseeb us se jo bichray they aik baar
kahna usay k log wo ab taak basay nahi

maayusioN ki taiz hawaein chali haiN laakh
depaak meRi umeed k lakin bujhay nahi

[Guest7777]

Well said .... and welcome

[Azad]

bohut khoob

Welcome

[Ana]

Lovely. Deepak jalai rakhna. Who wrote this verse btw?

[WiseGuy]

Re: is sooch per amal k magaR hoslay nahi

Originally posted by Paglee:


lamhaY wo aiyeN gaiN jo ab taak sunay nahi
wo dard tum saho gaye jo hum ne shahay nahi

in sabaz moasmooN maiN kareN kis pe aytabaaR?
paat-jhar rutooN k zakham be ab taak bharay nahi

barsoN se sochtey hiaN k tujhay bhool jaien hum
is sooch per amal k magaR hoslay nahi

wo kam naseeb us se jo bichray they aik baar
kahna usay k log wo ab taak basay nahi

maayusioN ki taiz hawaein chali haiN laakh
depaak meRi umeed k lakin bujhay nahi

Bohat Khoob Paglee,
welcome to the GupShup

[BanJaraa]

Welcome Paglee.....

Ab samaj aai posting main itni der kion lagi.....

Pagleeeee.... execptnionaly nice....


thanxxxx for sharing.... who is the poet?

[chand_chehra]

Re: is sooch per amal k magaR hoslay nahi

Originally posted by Paglee:


lamhaY wo aiyeN gaiN jo ab taak sunay nahi
wo dard tum saho gaye jo hum ne shahay nahi

in sabaz moasmooN maiN kareN kis pe aytabaaR?
paat-jhar rutooN k zakham be ab taak bharay nahi

barsoN se sochtey hiaN k tujhay bhool jaien hum
is sooch per amal k magaR hoslay nahi

wo kam naseeb us se jo bichray they aik baar
kahna usay k log wo ab taak basay nahi

maayusioN ki taiz hawaein chali haiN laakh
depaak meRi umeed k lakin bujhay nahi

very nice paglee g thanks for sharing
welcome to GS

[Azam#1]

[Dilsay]

Well said and welcome....

[Dragon~King]

[BrokenSky]

great stuff.....

[Pyara sa doost]

nice stuff

[Amal]

Re: is sooch per amal k magaR hoslay nahi

Originally posted by Paglee:


barsoN se sochtey hiaN k tujhay bhool jaien hum
is sooch per amal k magaR hoslay nahi

maayusioN ki taiz hawaein chali haiN laakh
depaak meRi umeed k lakin bujhay nahi

Bohat khoob...By the way, do you still need a
welcome after spending so much time on gupshup?

[nikii]

bhut khoob
welcome to GS

[WiseGuy]

Re: Re: is sooch per amal k magaR hoslay nahi

Originally posted by Amal:



Bohat khoob...By the way, do you still need a
welcome after spending so much time on gupshup?

LOL Amal, you're right....

Magar woh kabhi kabhi kisika ka khush aamdeed kehna acha lagta hai
Hum yahi soch key baar baar is mehfil main roop badal badal ker aaye