do lafz is zubaaN sey jo keh paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

[Azam#1]

do lafz is zubaaN sey jo keh paoN, to sakooN paoN ..
apni Ana ko dafn maiN kar paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

karta raha he mujh pe hakoomat mera zameer ..
is zulm-e-musalsal se nikal paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

dars-e-wafa ka boojh mere shaanoN pe dhara he ..
is baar ko kaaandhoN se hata paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

ankhoN ki nami mujh se chura le gaya koi ..
qatraey kisi se maang ke laaoN, to baha paoN ..

sargoshiyaaN pheli hain, ab har simt jahaN maiN ..
aye kaash ke is shor ki had se maiN nikal jaoN ..

khamooshiyaN, tanhaayaaN or apni zaat hoo ..
in mehfilooN se door, kahin doooor chala jaoN ..

safar-e-hayaat le chala he mujh ko baha ke ..
do pal ko tehar jaoN, to kuch hosla bhi paoN ..

meri nazar se guzre hain kitne hi mekadey ..
masjid se nikal paoN, to onki taraf bhi jaoN ..

kehtey hain yaar, pee ley! bas ik ghoont hi pee ley ..
darta hoon kaheen, apni nazar sey na main gir jaoN ..

is zindagi main dost mile hain bohot mujhe ..
hamzaad garr ik dhoondhna chahooN, to kidhar jaoN? ..

nafrat si bass gai hay ab qalb-o-dimagh main ..
aisa na ho ke aag main, apni hi main jal jaoN ..

har shaks mujhe dekh kar ibrat ka sabaq le ..
main naqash aise choor kar, duniya se guzar jaoN ..

By Me.

[Dilsay]

Very nice

[lost soul]

Very Nice Azam, .

[chand_chehra]

very nice keep it up

[HeArT HaCKeR]

Re: do lafz is zubaaN sey jo keh paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

Originally posted by Azam#1:


do lafz is zubaaN sey jo keh paoN, to sakooN paoN ..
apni Ana ko dafn maiN kar paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

karta raha he mujh pe hakoomat mera zameer ..
is zulm-e-musalsal se nikal paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

dars-e-wafa ka boojh mere shaanoN pe dhara he ..
is baar ko kaaandhoN se hata paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

ankhoN ki nami mujh se chura le gaya koi ..
qatraey kisi se maang ke laaoN, to baha paoN ..

sargoshiyaaN pheli hain, ab har simt jahaN maiN ..
aye kaash ke is shor ki had se maiN nikal jaoN ..

khamooshiyaN, tanhaayaaN or apni zaat hoo ..
in mehfilooN se door, kahin doooor chala jaoN ..

safar-e-hayaat le chala he mujh ko baha ke ..
do pal ko tehar jaoN, to kuch hosla bhi paoN ..

meri nazar se guzre hain kitne hi mekadey ..
masjid se nikal paoN, to onki taraf bhi jaoN ..

kehtey hain yaar, pee ley! bas ik ghoont hi pee ley ..
darta hoon kaheen, apni nazar sey na main gir jaoN ..

is zindagi main dost mile hain bohot mujhe ..
hamzaad garr ik dhoondhna chahooN, to kidhar jaoN? ..

nafrat si bass gai hay ab qalb-o-dimagh main ..
aisa na ho ke aag main, apni hi main jal jaoN ..

har shaks mujhe dekh kar ibrat ka sabaq le ..
main naqash aise choor kar, duniya se guzar jaoN ..

By Me.

its beautiful

[Guest]

really nice, keep it up...

[NikamiJano]

Re: do lafz is zubaaN sey jo keh paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

Originally posted by Azam#1:


ankhoN ki nami mujh se chura le gaya koi ..
qatraey kisi se maang ke laaoN, to baha paoN ..

khamooshiyaN, tanhaayaaN or apni zaat hoo ..
in mehfilooN se door, kahin doooor chala jaoN ..

new thread kholain k yshi per sab ko bata dain (btw kahan ja rahya ap)

safar-e-hayaat le chala he mujh ko baha ke ..
do pal ko tehar jaoN, to kuch hosla bhi paoN ..

is zindagi main dost mile hain bohot mujhe ..
hamzaad garr ik dhoondhna chahooN, to kidhar jaoN? ..

ab aur be kahin ja k dhoondhain gain ap yehi per he rahiey keon idher udher

nafrat si bass gai hay ab qalb-o-dimagh main ..
aisa na ho ke aag main, apni hi main jal jaoN ..

har shaks mujhe dekh kar ibrat ka sabaq le ..
main naqash aise choor kar, duniya se guzar jaoN

nahi nahi jana nahi abhi nahi jana nahi


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btw mazak a part bohat achi gazal hai..keep it up

[nikii]

veryy niceee

[ghazal kisi ke]

nicee

[Azam#1]

Thanks alot Dilsey, Lost soul, moon face ji, HeArT HaCKeR, Vivacious, nikii and ghazal kisi ke for the appreciation :~)

[Azam#1]

Re: Re: do lafz is zubaaN sey jo keh paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

Originally posted by NikamiJano:

new thread kholain k yshi per sab ko bata dain (btw kahan ja rahya ap): p

tumney zinda rehna hey ke nahi ???

ab aur be kahin ja k dhoondhain gain ap yehi per he rahiey keon idher udher : p

yahan koi lift hi nahi karwata

: wave: : nono: nahi nahi jana nahi abhi nahi jana nahi

kiyon bahir barsaat ho rahi hey kiya ???

btw mazak a part bohat achi gazal hai..keep it up : )

mera bhi mazak ka part hi tha .. and thanks for the reply :~)

[ScorpiOO]

Re: do lafz is zubaaN sey jo keh paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

Originally posted by Azam#1:


do lafz is zubaaN sey jo keh paoN, to sakooN paoN ..
apni Ana ko dafn maiN kar paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

karta raha he mujh pe hakoomat mera zameer ..
is zulm-e-musalsal se nikal paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

ankhoN ki nami mujh se chura le gaya koi ..
qatraey kisi se maang ke laaoN, to baha paoN ..

safar-e-hayaat le chala he mujh ko baha ke ..
do pal ko tehar jaoN, to kuch hosla bhi paoN ..

kehtey hain yaar, pee ley! bas ik ghoont hi pee ley ..
darta hoon kaheen, apni nazar sey na main gir jaoN ..

nafrat si bass gai hay ab qalb-o-dimagh main ..
aisa na ho ke aag main, apni hi main jal jaoN ..

har shaks mujhe dekh kar ibrat ka sabaq le ..
main naqash aise choor kar, duniya se guzar jaoN ..

By Me.

Excellent Azam bhai!!!

Long time no see, where are you these days ?

[udaasaankhein]

Re: do lafz is zubaaN sey jo keh paoN, to sakooN paoN ..

Originally posted by Azam#1:




is zindagi main dost mile hain bohot mujhe ..
hamzaad garr ik dhoondhna chahooN, to kidhar jaoN? ..

very nice specially this one..

[Dragon~King]

Buhat Khoob

[Azam#1]

Thanks for the reply ScorpiOO, udaasankhein and Dragon King :~)