Apnay honton pur

[Pehli Kiran]

Apnay honton pur sajana chahta hon
Aaa tujhay gun gunana chahta hon

Koi anso teray daman pur gir kur
Boond ko moti banana chahta hon

Thuk gaya mayn kartay kartay yaad tujh ko
Ab tujhay mayn yaad ana chahta hon

Chhaa raha hay sari basti mayn andhera
Roshni ho ghur jaalana chahta hon

Akhri hichki teray zanon pay aye
Maut bhi mayn shairana chahta hon

[aadhoorighazal]

Re: Apnay honton pur

Thuk gaya mayn kartay kartay yaad tujh ko
Ab tujhay mayn yaad ana chahta hoon

very very beautiful..thanks kiran.

[Dilsay]

Akhri hichki teray zanon pay aye
Maut bhi mayn shairana chahta hon


Ya nahi hoo sakta...................

[XChorniX]

bohot achay :biggthumb

very nice sista, keep it up

btw welcome to GupShup, hope u have a wonda ful time hea

happy postin

[Capricorn]

Re: Apnay honton pur

Originally posted by Pehli Kiran:

Thuk gaya mayn kartay kartay yaad tujh ko
Ab tujhay mayn yaad ana chahta hon

This one is great....last walee verse is a bit weird!!!

[HeArT HaCKeR]

beautiful

[Dragon~King]

very nice

[Guest]

nice one

[arifnawaz1]

Us ke hontoo pe kuch kaanpta reh gaya
Aatay aatay mera naam sa reh gaya...
Woh mere saamne hi gaya aur mein
Raastay ki tarha dekhta reh gaya

Keep it up

[guybrush]

good one

[Pehli Kiran]

Originally posted by arifnawaz:
Us ke hontoo pe kuch kaanpta reh gaya
Aatay aatay mera naam sa reh gaya...
Woh mere saamne hi gaya aur mein
Raastay ki tarha dekhta reh gaya

Keep it up

arifnawaz u r back :~)

gooooood.