Janoon

[Maheen2002]

teray ashq (tear) ki har boond ka rishta hai meri aankhoan se
tujhay aik pal bhi jo ghum milay, meri har khushi be qaar hai
tujhay chahna janoon hai, tujhay mangna dua meri
iss baat pe khafa na ho, meray dil ka tu qaraar hai!!!!!

[Dilsay]

It is great... thanks for sharing....

[Koyal]

Re: Janoon

Originally posted by Maheen2002:
teray ashq ki har boond ka rishta hai meri aankhoN se
tujhay aik pal bhi jo ghum milay meri har khushi be qaar hai
tujhay chahna janoon hai tujhay mangna dua meri
iss baat pe khafa na ho meray dil ka tu qaraar hai!!!!!

[ghazal kisi ke]

nice

[Galaxy]

pasand aayi:biggthumb, buhat khoob

[Jaan Lewaa]

keep it up

[Dragon~King]

Nice

[Maheen2002]

Originally posted by Galaxy:
pasand aayi:biggthumb, buhat khoob

Pasand karnay ka shukriya... :biggthumb

[Maheen2002]

Thanx Jaan Lewaa, Galaxy, ghazal kisi ke, Koyal & Dil say for liking it and replying...

[Pyara sa doost]

wow gr8

teray ashq (tear) ki har boond ka rishta hai meri aankhoan se
tujhay aik pal bhi jo ghum milay, meri har khushi be qaar hai


very nice


bohat kuhb

[Azad]

Re: Janoon

Originally posted by Maheen2002:
teray ashq (tear) ki har boond ka rishta hai meri aankhoan se
tujhay aik pal bhi jo ghum milay, meri har khushi be qaar hai
tujhay chahna janoon hai, tujhay mangna dua meri
iss baat pe khafa na ho, meray dil ka tu qaraar hai!!!!!

[arifnawaz1]

Bahut khoob

Mere siwa koi itna udaas bhi tu na tha
Khizaan ke chand ko acha laga mera chehra
Kitaab khol raha tha woh apne maazi ki
Warq warq per bikharta gaya mera chehra

[Guest]

beautiful

[Azam#1]

Bohot achey ... bai bohot achey

[ghazal kisi ke]

beautiful