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    #1

    Bazam-e-shayari May 2013

    Ab aya na camel mountain k down

    Okay all BB members don't get shocked i have been asked to open this thread so here you go

    Rules:

    1.All old rules

    2.Shair should be your own and not genuine (let's see the talent you people have)


    3. If it is possible mention the year (in which it was written) or a brief background what made you write that shair (just for fun)

    4. Start posting
    Dil dil Pakistan
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    Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013

    Originally posted by marinakhan View Post
    Ab aya na camel mountain k down

    Okay all BB members don't get shocked i have been asked to open this thread so here you go

    Rules:

    1.All old rules

    2.Shair should be your own and not genuine (let's see the talent you people have)

    You own ?!?! Genuine?!?!
    A cigarette that bears a lipstick's traces ... An airline ticket to romantic places ..

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      #3
      Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013

      ye to shoarae gupshp ka thread hai
      We should care for each other more than we care for ideas, or else we will end up killing each other.

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        #4
        Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013

        Kia hua?
        Dil dil Pakistan

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          #5
          Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013

          Originally posted by muqawwee123 View Post
          ye to shoarae gupshp ka thread hai
          what's the difference?
          Dil dil Pakistan

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            #6
            Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013

            Originally posted by marinakhan View Post
            what's the difference?
            Intikhab main hum doosron ke maal per hath saaf karte hain, baat jab apne shair ki aati hai to Shoara e gupshup is the right forum.

            BTW: Nice idea, moving this to shoare gupshup. lets see how people can come up with their own takhleeqaat
            We should care for each other more than we care for ideas, or else we will end up killing each other.

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              #7
              Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013

              I start with my shair wrote last year:

              Ishq wo munsif ke saza hatmi hai
              na koi jarah kare na koi daleel sune

              kiyun likha tha yaad nahin, bus zehn main line atak gai thi
              We should care for each other more than we care for ideas, or else we will end up killing each other.

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                #8
                Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013

                abhi babhi likha hy

                irshad hy **COUGHING** GALA KHANKAAR KER SAAF KIA*

                ~~*~*~*~*~*~*~
                AARZ KIA HY

                sari dunia nikli hue hy GS pe
                ek vohi dushmany ja,n nzr nahi aata
                AAdmi jo kehta hy AAdmi jo sunta hy ZINdgi bhar vo SADAIN pecha kerti hein
                AADmi jo leta hy AAdmi jo deta hyZINdgi bhr vo DUAIN pecha kerti hein

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                  #9
                  Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013

                  ^dushman kon

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                    #10
                    Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013

                    AAdmi jo kehta hy AAdmi jo sunta hy ZINdgi bhar vo SADAIN pecha kerti hein
                    AADmi jo leta hy AAdmi jo deta hyZINdgi bhr vo DUAIN pecha kerti hein

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                      #11
                      Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013

                      icon se kese pata chaley ga

                      muqawee bhai kese ayi line zehan main hmmm

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                        #12
                        Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013

                        Originally posted by fariha ali View Post
                        icon se kese pata chaley ga

                        muqawee bhai kese ayi line zehan main hmmm
                        film Damini main Sunny deol ko line 'tareekh pe tareekh tareekh pe tareekh' kehte huwe sun kar
                        We should care for each other more than we care for ideas, or else we will end up killing each other.

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                          #13
                          Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013

                          Originally posted by muqawwee123 View Post
                          I start with my shair wrote last year:

                          Ishq wo munsif ke saza hatmi hai
                          na koi jarah kare na koi daleel sune

                          kiyun likha tha yaad nahin, bus zehn main line atak gai thi
                          her baar aik hi shair post kr dety hain
                          A new person in your life is an opportunity to have an insight into yourself!!

                          R.S

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                            #14
                            Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013

                            Originally posted by jiia View Post
                            abhi babhi likha hy

                            irshad hy **COUGHING** GALA KHANKAAR KER SAAF KIA*

                            ~~*~*~*~*~*~*~
                            AARZ KIA HY

                            sari dunia nikli hue hy GS pe
                            ek vohi dushmany ja,n nzr nahi aata
                            kon kon
                            A new person in your life is an opportunity to have an insight into yourself!!

                            R.S

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                              #15
                              Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013

                              Dil sy likha ho ga shayd isi liye
                              Dil dil Pakistan

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