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    Hatim Jawed ki shairy

    Mohabbat dosti ghairat deyanat chheen leti hai |na jaane aur bhi kya kya seyasat chheen leti hai ||mere khwabo'n ko taabeere'n mayassar ho'n to kaisey ho'n ?meri saari kamaai to zaroorat chheen leti hai ||naee tahzeeb ke deewaano'n ko ye kaun samjhaae ?zara si bhonl bhi purkho'n ki izzat chheen leti hai ||dupatta sar pe rakh leney mein aakhir harj hi kya hai ?numaaish husn ki kitno'n ki asmat chheen leti hai ||gila kaanto'n se kya zulmo-sitam to unki fitrat hai |gulo'n ki berukhi jeene ki chaahat chheen leti hai ||kabhi paao'n taley se khee'nch leti hai zamee'n zalim |kabhi ye zindgi 'Jawed' se chhat chheen leti hai || ---Hatim Jawed

    #2
    Re: Hatim Jawed ki shairy

    Ajeeb hai yea Khambkhat GS ki Screen
    Space Bar use karne ki Ijazat chheen Layte hai

    Do not judge me by my PAST , I dont live there anymore

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      #3
      Re: Hatim Jawed ki shairy

      meri sari qamai tu zarurat cheen leti hai...bohat alaa per paen agar is ko poetic style main likh dete tu or maza a jana tha:s
      Live 4 others.....chuchu

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        #4
        Re: Hatim Jawed ki shairy

        بہت خوب

        Aap maghroor kiyuN samajhtay heiN
        mujhay kam bolnay ki a'adet hay

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          #5
          Re: Hatim Jawed ki shairy

          Boht Khob Hatim Jawed

          abroad

          likhty rahiye aur share karty rahiye
          O Allah the Almighty
          protect me and guide me

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            #6
            Re: Hatim Jawed ki shairy

            Originally posted by sfaseehrabbani View Post

            بہت خوب

            bahot-bahot shukriya fseeh bhai.

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              #7
              Re: Hatim Jawed ki shairy

              Originally posted by Shazia Arif View Post
              meri sari qamai tu zarurat cheen leti hai...bohat alaa per paen agar is ko poetic style main likh dete tu or maza a jana tha:s
              hausla-afzai ka bahot-bahot shukriya shazia Arif sahiba!

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                #8
                Re: Hatim Jawed ki shairy

                Originally posted by Innocent Smile View Post
                Boht Khob Hatim Jawed

                abroad

                likhty rahiye aur share karty rahiye
                Naacheez ki himmat-afzaai ka bahot-bahot shukriya janab !

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                  #9
                  Re: Hatim Jawed ki shairy

                  Originally posted by Naabigh View Post
                  Ajeeb hai yea Khambkhat GS ki Screen
                  Space Bar use karne ki Ijazat chheen Layte hai

                  SHUKRIYA Janab! ummeed hai aagey bhi rahnumaai karte rahengey.

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                    #10
                    Re: Hatim Jawed ki shairy

                    Betiya'n sasuraal betey kaam par baahar gaye |
                    De ke boorhey baap ko tanhaai ki chaadar gaye ||

                    Mar chuki thi laadli beti dawao'n ke baghair |
                    Bech kar apna lahoo jab tak palat kar ghar gaye ||

                    Kaarkhaney hum se zinda hum watan ki jaan hain |
                    Hum ne hi ghalla ugaya hum hi bhookey mar gaye ||
                    thi yahi uski khata wo hoobsoorat thi bahot |
                    Chaak daaman uski ismat ka darindey kar gaye ||

                    iss qadar JAWED khasta ho chuki hai chhat meri |
                    Naam baarish ka suna to mere bachchey dar gaye ||


                    ---Hatim Jawed.
                    Last edited by Hatim Jawed; Dec 27, 2011, 01:52 PM. Reason: to change in poetry style

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                      #11
                      Re: Hatim Jawed ki shairy

                      بہت اچھی غزل ہے حاتم بھائی

                      داد قبول کیجیے

                      Aap maghroor kiyuN samajhtay heiN
                      mujhay kam bolnay ki a'adet hay

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                        #12
                        Re: Hatim Jawed ki shairy

                        ہر غزل یا نظم کے لیے الگ تھریڈ لگایا کیجیے۔

                        آپ کا بہت شکریہ

                        Aap maghroor kiyuN samajhtay heiN
                        mujhay kam bolnay ki a'adet hay

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