Hatim Jawed ki shairy

[Hatim Jawed]

Mohabbat dosti ghairat deyanat chheen leti hai |na jaane aur bhi kya kya seyasat chheen leti hai ||mere khwabo'n ko taabeere'n mayassar ho'n to kaisey ho'n ?meri saari kamaai to zaroorat chheen leti hai ||naee tahzeeb ke deewaano'n ko ye kaun samjhaae ?zara si bhonl bhi purkho'n ki izzat chheen leti hai ||dupatta sar pe rakh leney mein aakhir harj hi kya hai ?numaaish husn ki kitno'n ki asmat chheen leti hai ||gila kaanto'n se kya zulmo-sitam to unki fitrat hai |gulo'n ki berukhi jeene ki chaahat chheen leti hai ||kabhi paao'n taley se khee'nch leti hai zamee'n zalim |kabhi ye zindgi 'Jawed' se chhat chheen leti hai || ---Hatim Jawed

[Naabigh]

Re: Hatim Jawed ki shairy

Ajeeb hai yea Khambkhat GS ki Screen
Space Bar use karne ki Ijazat chheen Layte hai

[Shazia Arif]

Re: Hatim Jawed ki shairy

meri sari qamai tu zarurat cheen leti hai...bohat alaa per paen agar is ko poetic style main likh dete tu or maza a jana tha:s

[sfaseehrabbani]

Re: Hatim Jawed ki shairy

بہت خوب

[Innocent Smile]

Re: Hatim Jawed ki shairy

Boht Khob Hatim Jawed

abroad

likhty rahiye aur share karty rahiye

[Hatim Jawed]

Re: Hatim Jawed ki shairy

بہت خوب

bahot-bahot shukriya fseeh bhai.

[Hatim Jawed]

Re: Hatim Jawed ki shairy

meri sari qamai tu zarurat cheen leti hai...bohat alaa per paen agar is ko poetic style main likh dete tu or maza a jana tha:s

hausla-afzai ka bahot-bahot shukriya shazia Arif sahiba!

[Hatim Jawed]

Re: Hatim Jawed ki shairy

Boht Khob Hatim Jawed

abroad

likhty rahiye aur share karty rahiye

Naacheez ki himmat-afzaai ka bahot-bahot shukriya janab !

[Hatim Jawed]

Re: Hatim Jawed ki shairy

Ajeeb hai yea Khambkhat GS ki Screen
Space Bar use karne ki Ijazat chheen Layte hai

SHUKRIYA Janab! ummeed hai aagey bhi rahnumaai karte rahengey.

[Hatim Jawed]

Re: Hatim Jawed ki shairy

Betiya'n sasuraal betey kaam par baahar gaye |
De ke boorhey baap ko tanhaai ki chaadar gaye ||

Mar chuki thi laadli beti dawao'n ke baghair |
Bech kar apna lahoo jab tak palat kar ghar gaye ||

Kaarkhaney hum se zinda hum watan ki jaan hain |
Hum ne hi ghalla ugaya hum hi bhookey mar gaye ||
thi yahi uski khata wo hoobsoorat thi bahot |
Chaak daaman uski ismat ka darindey kar gaye ||

iss qadar JAWED khasta ho chuki hai chhat meri |
Naam baarish ka suna to mere bachchey dar gaye ||

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---Hatim Jawed.

[sfaseehrabbani]

Re: Hatim Jawed ki shairy

بہت اچھی غزل ہے حاتم بھائی

داد قبول کیجیے

[sfaseehrabbani]

Re: Hatim Jawed ki shairy

ہر غزل یا نظم کے لیے الگ تھریڈ لگایا کیجیے۔

آپ کا بہت شکریہ