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    Siwa be'basi ke mila kuch nahi hey...


    Siwa be'basi ke mila kuch nahi hey
    magar zindagi sey gila kuch nahi hey

    sabhi dostoN ney sabaq ye sikhaya
    yahaN par wafa ka sila kuch nahi hey

    dhuwaN to nahi par sulagta raha dil
    ye kesey kahooN
    meiN jala kuch nahi hey

    hey tey har amal ki sazaa bhi, jazaa bhi
    na samjho bura ya bhala kuch nahi hey

    nai jang hey ye isey jeetney ko
    jigar ya faqat hosla kuch nahi hey

    ye saaNsoN ki sargam sureeli to hey par
    jo samjho to ye silsila kuch nahi hey



    Last edited by Amal; Nov 15, 2011, 12:29 PM. Reason: Correction
    Reh gaya kaam hamaara hi baghawat likhna...

    #2
    Re: Siwa be'basi ke mila kuch nahi hey...

    sabhi dostoN ney sabaq ye sikhaya
    khaloos-e-niat ka sila kuch nahi hey

    Nice

    hey tey har amal ki sazaa bhi, jazaa bhi
    na samjho bura ya bhala kuch nahi hey


    is mein tey ki jaga to nahi aaye gaa kaya tey punjabi kaa lafz nahi? and waisay is sher kaa matlab kaya hai last part kaa "naa samjho bura yaa bhala khuch bhi nahi hai "Yaa "samjh lo buraa ya bhala khuch bhi nahi hai "
    "The point is Allah. And everything besides Allah, is besides the point."

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      #3
      Re: Siwa be'basi ke mila kuch nahi hey...

      Originally posted by UZ View Post
      hey tey har amal ki sazaa bhi, jazaa bhi
      na samjho bura ya bhala kuch nahi hey

      is mein tey ki jaga to nahi aaye gaa kaya tey punjabi kaa lafz nahi? and waisay is sher kaa matlab kaya hai last part kaa "naa samjho bura yaa bhala khuch bhi nahi hai "Yaa "samjh lo buraa ya bhala khuch bhi nahi hai "
      Tey = set or fixed. Sheir ka matlab hey ke hum jo bhi kartey hey, us ke leeye ya to saza miley gi ya jaza. Koi bhi aesa amal nahi hey jis ka hisaab, kitaab nahi ho ga. Kuch log jo hayaat baad-az maot par yaqeen nahi rakhtey, unke nazdeek aap jo chaheiN is dunya meiN karte phireiN, hisaab-kitaab kuch nahi hey kiuNke zindagi ke ikhtitaam ke saath hi sab kuch khatm ho jaata hey. I hope it makes sense
      Reh gaya kaam hamaara hi baghawat likhna...

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        #4
        Re: Siwa be'basi ke mila kuch nahi hey...

        Nice Amal

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          #5
          Re: Siwa be'basi ke mila kuch nahi hey...

          Originally posted by Amal View Post
          ........
          dhuwaN to nahi par sulagta raha dil
          meiN kesey kahooN ke jala kuch nahi hey
          ye saaNsoN ki sargam sureeli to hey par
          jo samjho to ye silsila kuch nahi hey
          zabardast....

          beaut.....khush rahean janab...

          sat
          Not self but GOD and others

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            #6
            Re: Siwa be'basi ke mila kuch nahi hey...

            Wildness..!!

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              #7
              Re: Siwa be'basi ke mila kuch nahi hey...

              AMAL !bohat acha likha aap ne
              AAdmi jo kehta hy AAdmi jo sunta hy ZINdgi bhar vo SADAIN pecha kerti hein
              AADmi jo leta hy AAdmi jo deta hyZINdgi bhr vo DUAIN pecha kerti hein

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                #8
                Re: Siwa be'basi ke mila kuch nahi hey...

                بہت خوب، اچھے شعر پڑھنے کو ملے آپ کی اس

                غزل میں، لیکن لفظ نیت کا تلفظ دیکھ لیجیے

                کہ اس کی ی مشدد ہے، جس سے مصرعہ

                وزن میں نہیں رہا۔


                khaloos-e-niat ka sila kuch nahi hey

                اسی طرح لفظ کہ کو آپ نے کے کے وزن پر

                برتا ہے جبکہ یہ ایک حرف کے برابر شمار

                ہوتا ہے۔

                meiN kesey kahooN ke jala kuch nahi hey

                ان دو مصرعوں کو دیکھ لیجیے گا۔

                Aap maghroor kiyuN samajhtay heiN
                mujhay kam bolnay ki a'adet hay

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                  #9
                  Re: Siwa be'basi ke mila kuch nahi hey...

                  Shukriya Faseeh bhai...taseeh kar di hey meiN ney
                  Reh gaya kaam hamaara hi baghawat likhna...

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                    #10
                    Re: Siwa be'basi ke mila kuch nahi hey...

                    Originally posted by Amal View Post
                    Shukriya Faseeh bhai...taseeh kar di hey meiN ney

                    Bohat khoob, umda hae..
                    Aap maghroor kiyuN samajhtay heiN
                    mujhay kam bolnay ki a'adet hay

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                      #11
                      Re: Siwa be'basi ke mila kuch nahi hey...

                      behtareen ghazal hai Amal bhai..

                      aur we miss you a lot...ab aa jain wapis
                      O Allah the Almighty
                      protect me and guide me

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                        #12
                        Re: Siwa be'basi ke mila kuch nahi hey...

                        Originally posted by Amal View Post


                        ye saaNsoN ki sargam sureeli to hey par


                        i love this misra very much and 1-3 ashaar b
                        :crying:

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                          #13
                          Re: Siwa be'basi ke mila kuch nahi hey...

                          Amal achi hai ap ki gazal lakin maza nahi aya itna parnay ap ki bahtreen gazlain parh k ye bus theek hai umeed hai ap mind nahi karo gay
                          ~BadlooN peR baseRa~

                          /)/)..(\(\

                          ( ._.).(._. )
                          o(_(')(')..(')(')_)o

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                            #14
                            Re: Siwa be'basi ke mila kuch nahi hey...

                            Originally posted by Koyal View Post
                            Amal achi hai ap ki gazal lakin maza nahi aya itna parnay ap ki bahtreen gazlain parh k ye bus theek hai umeed hai ap mind nahi karo gay
                            Absolutely not...aap ko disappoint karne ke leeye muaazrat...agli baar kuch behtar koshish karooN ga
                            Reh gaya kaam hamaara hi baghawat likhna...

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                              #15
                              Re: Siwa be'basi ke mila kuch nahi hey...

                              As Always The Best Of Amal !!

                              Love Your Writings Man !!
                              God: The most popular scapegoat for our sins.

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