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    Match-It — March-16-To-23

    Third edition of Match-it.

    A few things to remember:
    As usual, here in Sho'ra-e-Gupshup, your contribution must be your very own creation.
    You can post only one sheir. So think thrice before you type it out.
    Do not post complete ghazal or nazm.
    This competition will expire in one week and a winner will be announced.
    Picture will change with every new compeition.
    Make it a nice presentation. Make your sheir bold, change color, italics, center or something or anything more nice-looking
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    PS: For suggestions, please PM either me or NikamiJano, no suggestion here please. You can also suggest us a picture to be used for future Match-It competitions.
    Reh gaya kaam hamaara hi baghawat likhna...

    #2
    Re: Match-It March-16-To-23

    n/a
    Last edited by Zamil; Mar 17, 2006, 08:47 AM.
    * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

    Charkh-e-Sukhan Pe Kitne Taare
    Sab Se Chhotta Taara Main.........
    .

    Zamil .

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      #3
      Re: Match-It March-16-To-23


      Phir kaali poshaak pehen li, chehra utra, geisoo bikhre
      Us k khat ko phir se khola, nikli siski, aansoo bikhre

      Zamil
      * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

      Charkh-e-Sukhan Pe Kitne Taare
      Sab Se Chhotta Taara Main.........
      .

      Zamil .

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        #4
        Re: Match-It March-16-To-23

        Originally posted by Zamil

        Phir kaali poshaak pehen li, chehra utra, geisoo bikhre
        Us k khat ko phir se khola, nikli siski, aansoo bikhre

        Zamil
        beautiful ....................................
        ~ ... palat k har taraf se kyon nazR us shaks per thehrii?
        wafa k silsilo`N kii wo, musalsal inteha thehra
        ...~

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          #5
          Re: Match-It March-16-To-23

          Zalim ... you have a talent! wounderful way to express feelings......
          ------------
          ye aap ham to bojh hai.n zamiin kaa.....

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            #6
            Re: Match-It March-16-To-23

            u have that wow factor in ur poetry zamil.. keep rockin


            my thought went around somewhere result cards ...

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              #7
              Re: Match-It March-16-To-23

              Originally posted by Amal


              A few things to remember:


              You can post only one sheir. So think thrice before you type it out.
              Just for reference guys
              Reh gaya kaam hamaara hi baghawat likhna...

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                #8
                Re: Match-It March-16-To-23

                Janay keya keya hamain is khat mein likha tha tum nay
                Band kamray mein teray khat ko jala kar roye.
                Shan
                Ham ko aya na haal-e-dil kehna
                Kitni batain woh keh gaye chup chap. 27/03/06

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                  #9
                  Re: Match-It March-16-To-23

                  lafzoon mein ghuli talkhi ka asar kia kehiye
                  dil-e-ranjoor ki kasak, ankhon ki jalan ka kia kehiye
                  Sunata hoon barre gaur se afsanaa-e-hasti
                  Kuch khawab hai, kuch asal hai, kuch tarz-e-ada hai

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                    #10
                    Re: Match-It March-16-To-23

                    Ab tu her aankh mein aansoo hai mere qatl ke baad
                    kis ke ser qatl ka ilzaam lagaya jaaye
                    hum ne maana ke taghaful na karoge lekin
                    khaak hojaaynge hum tumko khabar ho ne taq

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                      #11
                      Re: Match-It March-16-To-23

                      Originally posted by Zamil


                      Phir kaali poshaak pehen li, chehra utra, geisoo bikhre
                      Us k khat ko phir se khola, nikli siski, aansoo bikhre


                      Zamil
                      Bhai Zamil

                      very niceee............
                      hum ne maana ke taghaful na karoge lekin
                      khaak hojaaynge hum tumko khabar ho ne taq

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                        #12
                        Re: Match-It March-16-To-23

                        N/A
                        Last edited by zameer2u; Mar 22, 2006, 03:41 AM.

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                          #13
                          Re: Match-It March-16-To-23

                          Tere khat to hain bahana mere ashkon ke aab-shaar ka, aye sitam gar
                          Kiya kahein ke yeh aankhein hain nam, aitbar-e-ulfat tootne ke baad!
                          Mere junoon ka na lo imtihaan,
                          Jaanan

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                            #14
                            Re: Match-It March-16-To-23

                            chalo main api ghazal ka aaik shaaire likh deta hoon


                            zindagi ki har khushi se bhaagte rehtey hain hum
                            gham se hain maanoos itna jaagte rehtey hain hum

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                              #15
                              Re: Match-It March-16-To-23

                              There were again so many of beautifull aashaar posted, but again — it has to be only one. According to my humble understanding,Shahana's sheir describes the picture best. So guys, give Shahana a big hand for lovely creation Congrats Shahana







                              Originally posted by Shahana
                              Janay keya keya hamain is khat mein likha tha tum nay

                              Band kamray mein teray khat ko jala kar roye.
                              ~mujhaY kis jurm ki saza mili k meRi rooh taak hai thaki huwi
                              maiN apni jaga se hila nahi meRi saans phiR be ukhaR gaye~

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