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    Meri pehli Punjabi ghazal

    Friends, I tried to write a Punjabi ghazal very first time in my life. I had never done so ever. So just let me know how successful I was in my try


    Aey safar hayaati da weykho hun kitthey jaa kar mukda ey
    meiN jinna khich kar saaN leyNwa mera onna-e-dam hun kutthda ey

    har raat to pehley haoli jai meri neendar mey'toN puchdi ey
    akkhaN di wanjar tharti wich haorey khoaab kehrra huN ugda ey

    hun ban, banaa kar ki khatna hun saj, saNwar kar ki karna
    o'weiN rooh di galyaN koochaN wich dardaaN da kattha urrda ey

    haorey kehrri apni kit'ti aey jerri murr murr aggoN aaondi ey
    aey khorr naseebaN da loko aeweiN naal kad'di nai turda ey

    aey dukh hi paveiN sangi ho meiN pul pullah kar beittha waaN
    koi yaari aey'toN hey apni koi rishta aey'toN jurrda ey

    aey aas nemaani nai murrdi so waar meiN aennoN dasya ey
    jo dil wich merey rehnda si kisey hor shehar hun wasda ey!


    By: Amal
    Reh gaya kaam hamaara hi baghawat likhna...

    #2
    Re: Meri pehli Punjabi ghazal

    Buhat changi ey:~)
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    Terii pakeeza nigahoN kii qasam humdum
    Dil tou kya Rooh ney bhii chaaha hey tumhi ko

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      #3
      Re: Meri pehli Punjabi ghazal

      itni mushkil punjabi
      ~ ... palat k har taraf se kyon nazR us shaks per thehrii?
      wafa k silsilo`N kii wo, musalsal inteha thehra
      ...~

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        #4
        Re: Meri pehli Punjabi ghazal

        Pakeeza thanx
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        HeArT HaCKeR, Punjabi is easy to speak, but it's very, very difficult to read. By the way, it's hardly 50% of what actually should be called real Punjabi
        Reh gaya kaam hamaara hi baghawat likhna...

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          #5
          Re: Meri pehli Punjabi ghazal

          Bohat achay as usual.... aur kitni zabanoon main likh saktay hain aap
          _______________________________________
          Hijar main khoon rulatay ho kahaan hotay hoo
          Loat kar koyoon nahi atay hoo kahan hotay hoo

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            Re: Meri pehli Punjabi ghazal



            sadiyooN baad i got the chance to visit this place n the frst post i see is urz ... and well i say to myself .. time not wasted.. there i read somethin beautiful..


            keep writing in punjabi.. itz sounds nice to ears.. :- )

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              #7
              Re: Meri pehli Punjabi ghazal

              Originally posted by Amal
              Pakeeza thanx
              ---------------------
              HeArT HaCKeR, Punjabi is easy to speak, but it's very, very difficult to read. By the way, it's hardly 50% of what actually should be called real Punjabi
              baja farmaya.. mujhse nahi parhii ja rahi
              ~ ... palat k har taraf se kyon nazR us shaks per thehrii?
              wafa k silsilo`N kii wo, musalsal inteha thehra
              ...~

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                #8
                Re: Meri pehli Punjabi ghazal

                Originally posted by Nickless

                sadiyooN baad i got the chance to visit this place n the frst post i see is urz ... and well i say to myself .. time not wasted.. there i read somethin beautiful..

                keep writing in punjabi.. itz sounds nice to ears.. :- )
                Very bad It means I do not write good enough to keep my readers

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                Dilsay, Likhta to aek meiN hooN, ye Punjabi waali to bas wesey hi koshish ki, for a change
                ----------------
                HeArT HaCKeR, aap hi nahi, am sure bohat sey logoN sey nahi parrhi ja rahi ho gi that's why I won't be writing in punjabi anymore
                Reh gaya kaam hamaara hi baghawat likhna...

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                  #9
                  Re: Meri pehli Punjabi ghazal

                  Amal if possible translate this ghazal in urdu pls

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                    #10
                    Re: Meri pehli Punjabi ghazal

                    v nice Amal
                    ~BadlooN peR baseRa~

                    /)/)..(\(\

                    ( ._.).(._. )
                    o(_(')(')..(')(')_)o

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                      #11
                      Re: Meri pehli Punjabi ghazal

                      Amal koi chunga kaam nahi kurna?
                      hun chad devo aye sub khuch tu better but i know u cant
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                      ye aap ham to bojh hai.n zamiin kaa.....

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                        #12
                        Re: Meri pehli Punjabi ghazal

                        aey aas nemaani nai murrdi so waar meiN aennoN dasya ey
                        jo dil wich merey rehnda si kisey hor shehar hun wasda ey!

                        simply beautifulllllllllllllllllll
                        The heart is the only broken instrument that works.

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                          #13
                          Re: Meri pehli Punjabi ghazal

                          Originally posted by Bholay Bisray
                          Amal koi chunga kaam nahi kurna?
                          hun chad devo aye sub khuch tu better but i know u cant
                          kera kum
                          The heart is the only broken instrument that works.

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                            #14
                            Re: Meri pehli Punjabi ghazal

                            Originally posted by Shab-e-Hijar
                            kera kum
                            tusi aethy ki kar ray akhan ghuma ghuma k

                            Amal Beautiful punjabi vich v jawab nahi tuhada
                            ~mujhaY kis jurm ki saza mili k meRi rooh taak hai thaki huwi
                            maiN apni jaga se hila nahi meRi saans phiR be ukhaR gaye~

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                              #15
                              Re: Meri pehli Punjabi ghazal

                              O meray raba .Its a bay panah poem.What a strong grip you have inpanjabi though writting it first time.A very nice briefing of your commitment.keep on writting.
                              Shan
                              Ham ko aya na haal-e-dil kehna
                              Kitni batain woh keh gaye chup chap. 27/03/06

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