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    DIL KEE TARRPAAN ....

    Qudrat Khuda kee , kal ajaab eek sanhaa hovaa
    Ilag eey dard khud hum saay massehaa pochnaay lagaa

    Kal taak joo sujhataa thaa sabhee koo rukh eey manzil
    Rahbar woo hee manzil kaa pataa poochnay lagaaa

    Sirkaa kaay parda wooo rukh eey toobaa shikan saay
    Kayaa abb tooo chahtaa haay bataa poochnaay lagaaa

    Gustakh laay joo husaan kaa bay pardaa nazaraaa
    Miltee naheen kayaa uss koo sazaa poochnay lagaa

    Woo goo-shaa joo tareek thaa kitnaay barasss saay
    Kissss nay jalaya iss maain deyaa poochnay lagaa

    Nishtar ssay dil paay uss kaa faqat naam thaa likhaa
    Yeah kissss naay surkh rangg bhara poochnay lagaa

    Tarpaan dil eey Khalid kee thee kuchh itnee purr assaar
    Kassay maain doon sakoon woo buutt poochnay lagaa



    Khalid Qureshi
    24.2.06


    #2
    Re: DIL KEE TARRPAAN ....

    Urdu aur punajbi Mix hay ya mujhay ghalat feel ho raha hay? anyhow nice 1..thanks for sharing:-)
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    Terii pakeeza nigahoN kii qasam humdum
    Dil tou kya Rooh ney bhii chaaha hey tumhi ko

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      #3
      Re: DIL KEE TARRPAAN ....

      Pakeeza jee,

      100% Urdu haay

      Khalid Q.

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        #4
        Re: DIL KEE TARRPAAN ....

        Originally posted by khalidq


        Kal taak joo sujhataa thaa sabhee koo rukh eey manzil
        Rahbar woo hee manzil kaa pataa poochnay lagaaa

        Sirkaa kaay parda wooo rukh eey toobaa shikan saay
        Kayaa abb tooo chahtaa haay bataa poochnaay lagaaa

        Gustakh laay joo husaan kaa bay pardaa nazaraaa
        Miltee naheen kayaa uss koo sazaa poochnay lagaa

        Woo goo-shaa joo tareek thaa kitnaay barasss saay
        Kissss nay jalaya iss maain deyaa poochnay lagaa

        Nishtar ssay dil paay uss kaa faqat naam thaa likhaa
        Yeah kissss naay surkh rangg bhara poochnay lagaa

        Tarpaan dil eey Khalid kee thee kuchh itnee purr assaar
        Kassay maain doon sakoon woo buutt poochnay lagaa



        Khalid Qureshi
        24.2.06


        Bohat hi khoobsoorat nazm hey Khalid saheb....Thanx for sharing it with us
        Reh gaya kaam hamaara hi baghawat likhna...

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          #5
          Re: DIL KEE TARRPAAN ....

          very nice and very tipical urdu ghazal i mean its in very pure urdu.
          rakhtay hain jo auron kay liye pyar ka jazba
          wo log kabhi tot kay bikhra nahin kartay.

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            #6
            Re: DIL KEE TARRPAAN ....

            Shah jee and Amal ,

            Thanks for liking my poem .. Amal aap kaa hukam saar ankhoon paar .. eek aur Punjabi ke apne poem post kar rahaa hoon

            Sukhee raheen

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