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    Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

    Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna,
    to ye bhi likhna
    kay chand taaray,
    shahaab ankhien badal gaye hain
    wo zinda lamhay jo teri raahon mein
    tere anay kay muntazir thay
    wo thak kay raahon mien dhel gaye hain
    wo teri yaadien, khayal tere,
    wo ranj tere, milaal tere
    wo teri ankhein, sawal tere
    wo tum say mere tamaam
    rishtay bichar gaye hain,
    ujadh gaye hian
    udaasioon ka sabab jo likna
    to ye bhi likhna
    leraztay hoonton pe larhkharhti,
    dua kay soraj
    peghal gaye hain
    tamaam sapnay he jal gaye hain
    baad marnay ke tum meri kahani likna
    kese hoi bardaad meri jawani likhna
    ye bhi likhna kay mere hoont hansi ko tarsay kese
    bahta raha meri ankhoon say pani likna.
    Happiness keeps u Sweet, Trials keep u Strong, Sorrow keeps u Human, Failure Keeps u Humble, Success keeps u Glowing, But only God Keeps u Going....

    #2
    Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

    how sad...really nice read...

    poet?
    I never thought that you'd be the one to hold my heart
    but you came around and you knocked me off the ground from the start....

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      #3
      Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

      WoW
      bohat khoob
      i guess k yea farhat abas shah ke hay but not sure
      coz kafi arsay pehlay mai nay yea kesi book mai say parhi ti
      Our Lord, avert from us the punishment of Jahannam (the Hell); indeed, its punishment is a persisting affliction. (65) Indeed, it is evil as an abode and a place to dwell in (66)

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        #4
        Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

        m not poet got frm some 1 so juz thought to share wid friends

        Mighe be IS
        Happiness keeps u Sweet, Trials keep u Strong, Sorrow keeps u Human, Failure Keeps u Humble, Success keeps u Glowing, But only God Keeps u Going....

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          #5
          Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

          tamaam sapnay he jal gaye hain ...

          its amaizng how certain feelings can scatter those dreams and certain can ruin them in fire.....

          decent munda... you are decent after all- nice collection
          Life became all Gray! But NOW i have decided to paint it all over again.

          I Tawt I Taw A Puddy Tat

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            #6
            Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

            it taken so long to getinto a relationship deeply and et the break so easly, but leave the memories

            .really nice poem and rely deep

            Departures are wounds no one can heel,
            Memories are pleasures no one can steel





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              #7
              Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

              UdaasiyoN kaa Sabab jo likhaa
              tau yeh bhee likhnaa
              .....

              what a poem...

              laikin kaun likhta hai abb udaasiyoN kay sabab?

              woh runj teraY
              malaal teraY
              ....
              woh tum saY meraY tamaam
              rishtaY bichaR gaYe haiN
              ujaRh gaYe haiN...
              UdaasiyoN kaa Sabab jo likhaa
              tau yeh bhee likhnaa
              .....

              how so true

              thanks for sharing ...
              Quite often good things have hurtful consequences. There are instances of men who have been ruined by their money or KILLED by their COURAGE. ~Aristotle

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                #8
                Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

                Thanx A Lot Eve 1 :flower:
                Happiness keeps u Sweet, Trials keep u Strong, Sorrow keeps u Human, Failure Keeps u Humble, Success keeps u Glowing, But only God Keeps u Going....

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                  #9
                  Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

                  buhat khoob buhat umda janab thanks for sharing
                  woh nahi milta ek baar hamen
                  aur yeh zindaggi dobara nahi

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                    #10
                    Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

                    Originally posted by Decent^Munda
                    Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna,
                    to ye bhi likhna
                    kay chand taaray,
                    shahaab ankhien badal gaye hain
                    wo zinda lamhay jo teri raahon mein
                    tere anay kay muntazir thay
                    wo thak kay raahon mien dhel gaye hain
                    Very beautiful poem Decent^Munda...thanx for sharing
                    Reh gaya kaam hamaara hi baghawat likhna...

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                      #11
                      Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

                      desi muda one of my fav "udasioN ka sabab likhna" ...........per time kahan itna kisi k pass likhnay ko
                      ~mujhaY kis jurm ki saza mili k meRi rooh taak hai thaki huwi
                      maiN apni jaga se hila nahi meRi saans phiR be ukhaR gaye~

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                        #12
                        Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

                        lovely DM, one of my fav... from Noshi Gilani's poetry

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                          #13
                          Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

                          v nice collection ........................ really touching one

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                            #14
                            Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

                            Thanx a lot Friends
                            Happiness keeps u Sweet, Trials keep u Strong, Sorrow keeps u Human, Failure Keeps u Humble, Success keeps u Glowing, But only God Keeps u Going....

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                              #15
                              Re: Udaasioon ka sabab jo likhna...

                              great one DM bhai kabhe kabhe atye hen app but great post i really like it wasy or kia kia likhna ya bhe bata dien or hisab bhe
                              piyar insan ko insan bana deyta hey*

                              ab key bechray tu shayed kabi nahe milien gay jasay sokhey howay phool dobara darakhtoon may nahe lagay gay*

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