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    Faraar

    Faraar was written a few months ago and as per my knack of writing long poems, this one also has four long parts. And knowing that there aren't many takers for poems here, I am posting only two of them for I do not want to lose any of my fans. Bear with me guys :~)

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    Faraar

    Door kaheiN door kisi aesi jaga
    jahaN koi dukh na koi dard na hi pachtaawa koi
    dabey paaoN mera peecha karey ya saath chaley
    kisi dam torrtey huwey khaab ki koi aah-o-baka
    na to sun'ney meiN aaey aur na hi aaNkhoN meiN
    kisi toot'tey huwey taarey ka koi aks paley
    ya terey aaNchal sey bichrra huwa koi maasoom khayaal
    merey paas aa ke beyn karey shaam dhaley
    jahaaN meiN apney aap ko apni hi baahoN meiN leeye
    beittha rahooN, sehlaata rahooN, thap'thapaata rahooN!


    Door kaheiN door kisi aesi jaga
    jahaN koi raah, na parwaah na kisi manzil ki chaah
    na koi aas na koi yaas na koi maanoos sadaa
    na koi baagh na basti na koi kheit na sehra
    na kaheiN gheiroN ka jhurmat na koi apnoN ka dera
    na koi raat na doopehar na koi shaam na savera
    na kisi saey ki tamanna chahey wo aaNchal ho tera
    jahaaN meiN apney aap ko apni hi baahoN meiN leeye
    beittha rahooN, sehlaata rahooN, thap'thapaata rahooN!

    By: Amal
    Reh gaya kaam hamaara hi baghawat likhna...

    #2
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    Faraar

    Door kaheiN door kisi aesi jaga
    jahaN koi dukh na koi dard na hi pachtaawa koi
    dabey paaoN mera peecha karey ya saath chaley
    kisi dam torrtey huwey khaab ki koi aah-o-baka
    na to sun'ney meiN aaey aur na hi aaNkhoN meiN
    kisi toot'tey huwey taarey ka koi aks paley
    ya terey aaNchal sey bichrra huwa koi maasoom khayaal
    merey paas aa ke beyn karey shaam dhaley
    jahaaN meiN apney aap ko apni hi baahoN meiN leeye
    beittha rahooN, sehlaata rahooN, thap'thapaata rahooN!


    Door kaheiN door kisi aesi jaga
    jahaN koi raah, na parwaah na kisi manzil ki chaah
    na koi aas na koi yaas na koi maanoos sadaa
    na koi baagh na basti na koi kheit na sehra
    na kaheiN gheiroN ka jhurmat na koi apnoN ka dera
    na koi raat na doopehar na koi shaam na savera
    na kisi saey ki tamanna chahey wo aaNchal ho tera
    jahaaN meiN apney aap ko apni hi baahoN meiN leeye
    beittha rahooN, sehlaata rahooN, thap'thapaata rahooN!

    By: Amal[/QUOTE]
    Beautiful Aymal

    kisi dam torrtey huwey khaab ki koi aah-o-baka
    na to sun'ney meiN aaey aur na hi aaNkhoN meiN
    kisi toot'tey huwey taarey ka koi aks paley
    merey paas aa ke beyn karey shaam dhaley
    ~mujhaY kis jurm ki saza mili k meRi rooh taak hai thaki huwi
    maiN apni jaga se hila nahi meRi saans phiR be ukhaR gaye~

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      #3
      Re: Faraar

      Beautiful....

      Now Waiting for Two More
      (\__/)
      (_)
      JabBhi Milti Hay Mujhay.......

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        #4
        Re: Faraar

        It's lovely as usual... Really love the way you put words together... :-)

        Now post the other two parts as well :-)

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          #5
          Re: Faraar

          Beautiful poem Amal keep it up
          ~ ... palat k har taraf se kyon nazR us shaks per thehrii?
          wafa k silsilo`N kii wo, musalsal inteha thehra
          ...~

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            #6
            Re: Faraar

            beautifulllll amal

            ps
            mujhy bhi asi hi jaga ki talash hai :-(
            The heart is the only broken instrument that works.

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              #7
              Re: Faraar

              Maza Agia
              Meray Roz O Shab k Nisaab Main Meray Paas Apna To Kuch Nahi

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                #8
                Re: Faraar

                Zabardast poem Amal, can i post the other one?:~)
                .....................................
                Hum ney kaantoN ko bhi narmii sey chuhwaa hey aksar
                log be-dard heiN PhooloN ko massal detay heiN

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                  #9
                  Re: Faraar

                  NikamiJi thanx for liking the peom despite the fact that you are not a 'nazm person' :~)
                  ----------------------------
                  GS, KhamoshNigahein, do parts kaafi nahi kya? :~) Thanx for your appreciation.
                  ----------------------------
                  HeArT HaCKeR, Shab-e-Hijar and Azad, nazm pasand karney ke leeye be'had shukriya :-)
                  ----------------------------
                  Gul, no rights reserved, do anything you like :~)
                  Reh gaya kaam hamaara hi baghawat likhna...

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                    #10
                    Re: Faraar

                    Originally posted by Amal
                    Gul, no rights reserved, do anything you like :~)
                    its mean ijazat nahin hay:-(
                    .....................................
                    Hum ney kaantoN ko bhi narmii sey chuhwaa hey aksar
                    log be-dard heiN PhooloN ko massal detay heiN

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                      #11
                      Re: Faraar

                      I said "no rights reserved" ... matlab ke khuli ijaazat hey ... how come you got it all wrong?
                      Reh gaya kaam hamaara hi baghawat likhna...

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                        #12
                        Re: Faraar

                        tou yoon kahna thaa naa seedhi tarhaaN:~) english mujhay achi nahin lagtii
                        .....................................
                        Hum ney kaantoN ko bhi narmii sey chuhwaa hey aksar
                        log be-dard heiN PhooloN ko massal detay heiN

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                          #13
                          Re: Faraar

                          Very nice .... Aur khush rahain
                          _______________________________________
                          Hijar main khoon rulatay ho kahaan hotay hoo
                          Loat kar koyoon nahi atay hoo kahan hotay hoo

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                            #14
                            Re: Faraar

                            Beautiful :-)

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                              #15
                              Re: Faraar

                              Originally posted by Amal
                              Faraar

                              Door kaheiN door kisi aesi jaga
                              jahaN koi dukh na koi dard na hi pachtaawa koi
                              dabey paaoN mera peecha karey ya saath chaley
                              kisi dam torrtey huwey khaab ki koi aah-o-baka
                              na to sun'ney meiN aaey aur na hi aaNkhoN meiN
                              kisi toot'tey huwey taarey ka koi aks paley
                              ya terey aaNchal sey bichrra huwa koi maasoom khayaal
                              merey paas aa ke beyn karey shaam dhaley
                              jahaaN meiN apney aap ko apni hi baahoN meiN leeye
                              beittha rahooN, sehlaata rahooN, thap'thapaata rahooN!


                              Door kaheiN door kisi aesi jaga
                              jahaN koi raah, na parwaah na kisi manzil ki chaah
                              na koi aas na koi yaas na koi maanoos sadaa
                              na koi baagh na basti na koi kheit na sehra
                              na kaheiN gheiroN ka jhurmat na koi apnoN ka dera
                              na koi raat na doopehar na koi shaam na savera
                              na kisi saey ki tamanna chahey wo aaNchal ho tera
                              jahaaN meiN apney aap ko apni hi baahoN meiN leeye
                              beittha rahooN, sehlaata rahooN, thap'thapaata rahooN!

                              By: Amal
                              awwww its simply beautiful Amal ji just amazing... i'm waiting for the rest of 2parts..

                              btw I'm feeling the same way these days, aisi hi kissi jaga pe muje bhi jana he, maloom ho to bataye?...

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