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    koi raah batla do..................


    Salaam dostoon jaab Poetry likhnay kaa shouk hua tha tab mein nay sab say pehlay Jo poetry likhi thee aaj mujhay kisi nay meri apni poetry send ki tu woh waqt yaad agaya so im posting here



    Mein bahut udaas hoon
    Kuch pal apne mujhe dey do
    Khizaan ke sard patoon pey
    Bahaar bikhair do
    Meri ankhain tumhare intezaar mein
    Ab tak raah tak raheen hain
    In aankhoon ko qaraar dey do
    Koi tu rasta hoga
    Mujhe koi manzil dikhaa do
    Aik bhujhe huwi shama ko
    Phir sey jalaa do
    Tum ney yeh kya kar diya hai humein
    Aoo dekho aur humein pehchaano
    Hum khoo chuke hain har umeed
    Aik naye arzoo phir sey jaga doo
    Har manzar veeran hai
    Gum sum si daastaan hai
    Is daastaan ka koi Unwaan batla do
    Bhatkay huay Musaafir ko koi Raah Batladoo
    Meray veeran chehre pey
    Muskurahatoon key
    Deep jalaa do ...


    Ki Mohammad (S.a.w )se wafa tu ney tu Hum terey hain
    yeh jehan cheez hai kya Loh-o-Qalam terey hain...!!
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    Gum sum si daastaan hai
    Is daastaan ka koi Unwaan batla do
    Bhatkay huay Musaafir ko koi Raah Batladoo
    Meray veeran chehre pey
    Muskurahatoon key
    Deep jalaa do ...


    veryy nice lamhay bajii.. . .
    keep it up
    ~ ... palat k har taraf se kyon nazR us shaks per thehrii?
    wafa k silsilo`N kii wo, musalsal inteha thehra
    ...~

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      #3
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      Shauk acha hai issay jaari o saari rakhain

      Nice to see you again Lamhay ... Aati raha karain, acha lagta hai dil ko aap ka selection aur aap ki personal kavish ko parh kar

      ~*~ Koi sawaal kare tau kya kahun ussay ... Bicharne wale sabab tau bata judai ka ... ~*~

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        #4
        Re: koi raah batla do..................

        Is daastaan ka koi Unwaan batla do
        Bhatkay huay Musaafir ko koi Raah Batladoo
        Meray veeran chehre pey
        Muskurahatoon key
        Deep jalaa do ...


        Very touching, Lamhay
        Mere junoon ka na lo imtihaan,
        Jaanan

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          #5
          Re: koi raah batla do..................

          Beautiful ...
          (\__/)
          (_)
          JabBhi Milti Hay Mujhay.......

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            #6
            Re: koi raah batla do..................

            hameesha ke tarha.. very nice....
            The only one of its own kind.

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              #7
              Re: koi raah batla do..................

              Merey veeraan chehrey pey
              MuskurahatoN key
              Deep jala do...



              Very nice Lamhay... :-)

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                  #9
                  Re: koi raah batla do..................

                  khoo likha Mashallah !
                  sub show sha hay !

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