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    Jub aaNkH say aaNsoo beh niklay hum baat banana bhool gay'e

    Jub aaNkH say aaNsoo beh niklay hum baat banana bhool gay'e
    Hum chehra choopana bhool gay'e or palkeN jHukana bhool gay'e

    Jub kashtee dur bHaNwar meN pHaNsee to logoN say hum kia kahtay
    Hum aas lagana bhool gay'e or kashtee bachana bhool gay'e

    Jub pahlee nazar meN dekha usay to dil ka baasee jana usay
    Phir apnee wafa ko yead kia or apnee ana ko bhool gay'e

    Ub hum tum say kia kuch or kahaiN
    Hum to kHud ko haar chalay or apnay aap ko bhool gay'e
    Yaadein tau sath rehti hain, bas log aatey jaatey hain......

    #2
    Re: Jub aaNkH say aaNsoo beh niklay hum baat banana bhool gay'e

    nice
    The heart is the only broken instrument that works.

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      #3
      Re: Jub aaNkH say aaNsoo beh niklay hum baat banana bhool gay'e

      ^ thnks....
      Yaadein tau sath rehti hain, bas log aatey jaatey hain......

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        #4
        Re: Jub aaNkH say aaNsoo beh niklay hum baat banana bhool gay'e

        Originally posted by reet
        Jub aaNkH say aaNsoo beh niklay hum baat banana bhool gay'e
        Hum chehra choopana bhool gay'e or palkeN jHukana bhool gay'e

        Jub kashtee dur bHaNwar meN pHaNsee to logoN say hum kia kahtay
        Hum aas lagana bhool gay'e or kashtee bachana bhool gay'e

        Jub pahlee nazar meN dekha usay to dil ka baasee jana usay
        Phir apnee wafa ko yead kia or apnee ana ko bhool gay'e

        Again a very nice selection Reet, lekin last sheir kuch adhoora nahin lagtaa?
        .....................................
        Hum ney kaantoN ko bhi narmii sey chuhwaa hey aksar
        log be-dard heiN PhooloN ko massal detay heiN

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          #5
          Re: Jub aaNkH say aaNsoo beh niklay hum baat banana bhool gay'e

          beautiful ghazal.
          thanks for sharin :~)
          lekin last shair waQai mein adhoora lag raha hai
          ~ ... palat k har taraf se kyon nazR us shaks per thehrii?
          wafa k silsilo`N kii wo, musalsal inteha thehra
          ...~

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            #6
            Re: Jub aaNkH say aaNsoo beh niklay hum baat banana bhool gay'e

            Bahut hi achi ghazal hai... lekin like others already said... last shair adhoora waqayi kuch adhoora sa lag raha hai :-)

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              #7
              Re: Jub aaNkH say aaNsoo beh niklay hum baat banana bhool gay'e

              nice one
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                #8
                Re: Jub aaNkH say aaNsoo beh niklay hum baat banana bhool gay'e

                nice one !
                sub show sha hay !

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                  #9
                  Re: Jub aaNkH say aaNsoo beh niklay hum baat banana bhool gay'e

                  nice one!
                  ~BadlooN peR baseRa~

                  /)/)..(\(\

                  ( ._.).(._. )
                  o(_(')(')..(')(')_)o

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                    #10
                    Re: Jub aaNkH say aaNsoo beh niklay hum baat banana bhool gay'e

                    iss kadar hafza kamzoor hay hamara

                    hum misra pora krna bhoool gaye

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                      #11
                      Re: Jub aaNkH say aaNsoo beh niklay hum baat banana bhool gay'e

                      Bohat khoob Reet ....
                      ~*~Pain is Temporary Defeat is Permanent~*~

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                        #12
                        Re: Jub aaNkH say aaNsoo beh niklay hum baat banana bhool gay'e

                        GUl, HH, KN, Dania, Show_Sha, Koyal, Coolpeepa & Aryaan

                        thnx everyone for liking it........


                        mujhe bhi yeh adhoori si lagi.......par shayar ne isey poori hi likha hai.....
                        Yaadein tau sath rehti hain, bas log aatey jaatey hain......

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                          #13
                          Re: Jub aaNkH say aaNsoo beh niklay hum baat banana bhool gay'e

                          nice one.....

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                            #14
                            Re: Jub aaNkH say aaNsoo beh niklay hum baat banana bhool gay'e

                            /\ thnx....
                            Yaadein tau sath rehti hain, bas log aatey jaatey hain......

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                              #15
                              Re: Jub aaNkH say aaNsoo beh niklay hum baat banana bhool gay'e

                              Very Nice.... First three Ashaar very good... Tnx for Sharing REET
                              (\__/)
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                              JabBhi Milti Hay Mujhay.......

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