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    POEM needed

    I need a poem urgently....an "I miss you" one.

    dont ask why. first post some here and then I will explain later why.

    ~ the world is out to provoke you,if you get provoked it's your downfall! ~

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    Have you ever bothered to realize
    how much you mean to me?
    I care so much for you inside
    and miss you so deeply.

    My mind is always curious about
    the way things might have been.
    As days go by and time goes by,
    I look back once again.

    All the time I held you in my arms,
    I had the whole world right there.
    There you were, comforting me with
    all of your charms.

    Every little kiss from you
    was like a dream come true.
    This love that I have inside my heart,
    it all belonged to you!

    It's funny, all those little things
    I never thought I'd miss,
    Like all those conversations we had,
    or the first time we kissed.

    I guess that what I'm trying to say,
    is I miss and love you more each day!
    It hurts me not to see you,
    or not to know if you're ok.

    I want you to understand
    that I loved you from the start.
    And I want you to know,
    no matter how many miles
    we may be apart,
    you'll always hold a special place
    in my heart.
    thanks for pulling head outta your ass long enough to read my post, then highlighting & reading this. Signed:
    -faizy

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      #3
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      ^ wow.....did u write that by urself???
      Tere naam humne kiya hai jeevan apna saara sanam
      Pyaar bahut karte hai tumse,
      Ishq hai tu hamaara sanam...

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        #4
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        I miss you
        You miss me
        I miss parathas made with ghee
        Now just give me some karahi lamb on the bone
        Damn I miss ghar ka khaana so to home I'll phone
        Muslims are so good at dividing that they can divide the atom. If you see two Muslims, probably they belong to 3 parties.
        Al-Ghazali

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          #5
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          thanks faizy that was great.

          but can u give me something shorter that can fit in a text message?
          ~ the world is out to provoke you,if you get provoked it's your downfall! ~

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            #6
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            Originally posted by mAd_ScIeNtIsT
            I miss you
            You miss me
            I miss parathas made with ghee
            Now just give me some karahi lamb on the bone
            Damn I miss ghar ka khaana so to home I'll phone
            another proof of how "romantic" londoners are
            ~ the world is out to provoke you,if you get provoked it's your downfall! ~

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              #7
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              Originally posted by mAd_ScIeNtIsT
              I miss you
              You miss me
              I miss parathas made with ghee
              Now just give me some karahi lamb on the bone
              Damn I miss ghar ka khaana so to home I'll phone
              Hahha! lol omg Maddy is the GS Poetry king :love: oo my hero lol!

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                #8
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                omg impulse i'm writing a poem for class right now!! well, actually, it's a sonnet. but it's gotta rhyme and it's got this whole format thingy i gotta follow. even like a set number of syllables!! . i'm better with the freestyle crap i post on gs

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                  #9
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                  i need 3 poems...my 'own' work! but i hate poetry...n cant write poetry...i dont understand it..so would someone like to write me 3 poems...gotta be one theme tho...wut do u guys say?? they dont have to be too long...n they cant be too short...?
                  People put up walls not to keep people out but to see who cares enough to break them down

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                    #10
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                    Yea my teacher let's us use cuss words in our poetry and our stories that we right for class. That usually makes it a lot easier/funner.

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                      #11
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                      Originally posted by phatima1
                      Yea my teacher let's us use cuss words in our poetry and our stories that we right for class. That usually makes it a lot easier/funner.
                      the teachers today

                      if teachers are like this...wot can we expect of the kids
                      ~ the world is out to provoke you,if you get provoked it's your downfall! ~

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                        #12
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                        here is somethin i wrote earlier

                        http://www.paklinks.com/gs/showthread.php?t=181434


                        and

                        http://www.paklinks.com/gs/showthread.php?t=181367

                        !! G/-\m£z 0\\//ä !!
                        Im a rapping god I spit my shiit ~NEAR PERFECTION~ If you read my **** back to back you might give ya self an ~EAR INFECTION~ BY ME





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                          #13
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                          well phatima...since u can freestyle...would u like to help meeeeee..mine dont have to rhymee
                          People put up walls not to keep people out but to see who cares enough to break them down

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                            #14
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                            ohhhh i m a *WANA BE* lyricist tooo ..... but my flows go in-appropriate most of the time :S
                            !! G/-\m£z 0\\//ä !!
                            Im a rapping god I spit my shiit ~NEAR PERFECTION~ If you read my **** back to back you might give ya self an ~EAR INFECTION~ BY ME





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                              #15
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                              Originally posted by ChupKeSe
                              well phatima...since u can freestyle...would u like to help meeeeee..mine dont have to rhymee
                              naaahh I don't freestyle lol I write pyaarai sai nursery rhymes ..hahha.

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