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    Yeh zindagi aisi na thi pehlay hamari
    Na jaanay tum kab ayaay kab ham ko jagaya tum nay
    Na jaanay kab dil baygaana howa kab wo tumhaara howa
    Aik kami thi jo poori howi Ik ehsaas saa jo paida howa
    Ik junoon sa paida howa Ik tarap si baydaar howi
    Badal kar rakh dia sab kuch tum nay
    Abb dil apna raha na dil waala

    Hamain;
    Kitna pehchannay lagay ho tum
    Koi apna aap bhi nahi jaanta itna
    Parh laitay ho band honton ko tum
    Chupti nahi abb khushk hansi tum say
    Daik kar Kar laitay ho namm aankhon ko tum

    Jaga daiti hamain aksar yaad tumhaari
    Itna shiddat say yaad kartay ho tum
    Bhulaaya nai kisi pal tum nay ham ko
    Bin hamaray Bitaaya nai koi pal tum nay
    Ik jaan do qalib banaya tum nay
    Iss jisam ko apna banaya tum nay

    Bohat guroor hay ham ko ham par
    Wajah bhi to aisi rakhtay hain ham
    Q na ho guroor ham ko aakhir
    Tum sa jo nahi daikha kabhi ham nay



    Dedicated to ...
    By ...Ata
    Gari aur bivi aisi honi chahyay kay banda saath khara ho to apni lagay

    Ya Allah Bhagwaan ko bhi Muslim bana day ...


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    Originally posted by ?:


    Itna shiddat say yaad kartay ho tum
    Bhulaaya nai kisi pal tum nay ham ko
    Bin hamaray Bitaaya nai koi pal tum nay
    Ik jaan do qalib banaya tum nay
    Iss jisam ko apna banaya tum nay

    Bohat guroor hay ham ko ham par
    Wajah bhi to aisi rakhtay hain ham
    Q na ho guroor ham ko aakhir
    Tum sa jo nahi daikha kabhi ham nay



    Dedicated to ...
    By ...Ata
    i love this part bhut achaa likha ha

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      #3
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      Originally posted by nikii:


      i love this part bhut achaa likha ha
      Shukria Shimz ...aur baqi ka part ? hehe
      Gari aur bivi aisi honi chahyay kay banda saath khara ho to apni lagay

      Ya Allah Bhagwaan ko bhi Muslim bana day ...

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        #4
        Bohat khoob

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          #5
          humm
          Meray Roz O Shab k Nisaab Main Meray Paas Apna To Kuch Nahi

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            #6
            :-)
            acha likha hey bhaiyah:-)
            wants to become a clairvoyant!!!!!

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              #7
              oh its nice

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                #8
                Wonderful effort ... and yes, great dedication made ...
                Thanks for sharing !

                ~*~ Koi sawaal kare tau kya kahun ussay ... Bicharne wale sabab tau bata judai ka ... ~*~

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                  #9
                  bhut achay
                  ek khushi dil ne kia maang li
                  meri har khushi ko nazar lag gyi

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                    #10
                    very nice

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                      #11
                      Q na ho guroor ham ko aakhir
                      Tum sa jo nahi daikha kabhi ham nay



                      wah ata bhai zabardast !!

                      Ki Mohammad (S.a.w )se wafa tu ney tu Hum terey hain
                      yeh jehan cheez hai kya Loh-o-Qalam terey hain...!!
                      ______________

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                        #12
                        wow it is beautiful
                        Badal kar rakh dia sab kuch tum nay Abb dil apna raha na dil waala
                        words of magic you have used to express your feelings, someone very lucky
                        hum paii yeh kis nay harra rung dalla

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                          #13
                          beautiful
                          www.facebook.com/rjdania

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                            #14
                            mujhay qasam say bohat sharam aarai hay abb my face was all red and hot...and I really am blushed ...lol pata nai q indeed it was nothing but aap sab ki mohabbat aur piaar hay jo time nikaal kar parhtay bhi kuch aur reply bhi kartay hain...really honoring...
                            sab ka shukariaa
                            Mahnoor, lucky wo nai balkay main hoon and no magic , I am not jadugar

                            Swera
                            Rabika
                            Ghazal
                            Cute-pie
                            Azad
                            Jaan lewa

                            sab ka bohat bohat shukriaa


                            Arif Nawaz, thanks you sir,yep its dedicated to whom knows well byself!

                            Lamhay aap ka husn-e-nazar hay sachi warna hamain shairi kahan aati hehe thank you dear


                            Gari aur bivi aisi honi chahyay kay banda saath khara ho to apni lagay

                            Ya Allah Bhagwaan ko bhi Muslim bana day ...

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                              #15
                              arey wah wah

                              it was lovely reading it bhai....great job!
                              I never thought that you'd be the one to hold my heart
                              but you came around and you knocked me off the ground from the start....

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