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    tootey paRooN k zakham be un ko dekha dee'ay



    tootey paRooN k zakham be un ko dekha dee'ay
    teetli ne saray raaz gulooN ko bata dee'ay

    sehaN chamaN maiN aj ajeeb waa'qeya huwa
    shabnum ki aik boond ne gunchay jala dee'ay

    punchi udaas dekh k kuch soochnay k baad
    sayaad ne qafas se prinday uraa dee'ay

    baydaar tu zaror huwey they shaa'or-o-fikaR
    dil ne magaR thapak k dobaRa sulaa dee'ay

    is ne be meRi jo simat dekha na phir kabhi
    maiN be sab chiRaag jala k bhuja dee'ay
    ~BadlooN peR baseRa~

    /)/)..(\(\

    ( ._.).(._. )
    o(_(')(')..(')(')_)o


    #2
    wah

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      #3
      wow.. that was beautiful

      .. especially these two:


      tootey paRooN k zakham be un ko dekha dee'ay
      teetli ne saray raaz gulooN ko bata dee'ay

      is ne be meRi jo simat dekha na phir kabhi
      maiN be sab chiRaag jala k bhuja dee'ay
      Quite often good things have hurtful consequences. There are instances of men who have been ruined by their money or KILLED by their COURAGE. ~Aristotle

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        #4
        Re: tootey paRooN k zakham be un ko dekha dee'ay



        Shikar nicks ke zakham be un ko dekha dee'ay
        Chiknay ne saray raaz Bholay ko bata dee'ay

        GS Cafe' maiN aj ajeeb waa'qeya huwa
        Azad~ ki aik Post ne kalay'jay jala dee'ay

        Capri udaas dekh k kuch soochnay k baad
        Mod ne Haa'ton ke sub to'tay urraa dee'ay

        baydaar tu zaror huwey they Hum chat par
        US ne magaR Block pe dobaRa sulaa dee'ay

        is ne be meRi msg ko reply kia na phir kabhi
        maiN ne be sab puranay nicks mett'haa dee'ay


        Adab Arz

        Meray Roz O Shab k Nisaab Main Meray Paas Apna To Kuch Nahi

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          #5
          very nice
          The heart is the only broken instrument that works.

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            #6
            Re: tootey paRooN k zakham be un ko dekha dee'ay

            Originally posted by Koyal:

            shabnum ki aik boond ne gunchay jala dee'ay
            Loved this line
            Mere junoon ka na lo imtihaan,
            Jaanan

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              #7
              Re: tootey paRooN k zakham be un ko dekha dee'ay

              Originally posted by Koyal:
              [b][i]

              punchi udaas dekh k kuch soochnay k baad
              sayaad ne qafas se prinday uraa dee'ay
              bahot khoob koyal jee

              but kaash aise sayaad haqeeqat mein hote

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                #8
                bhut achay
                ek khushi dil ne kia maang li
                meri har khushi ko nazar lag gyi

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                  #9
                  Wow ... its superb ...

                  ~*~ Koi sawaal kare tau kya kahun ussay ... Bicharne wale sabab tau bata judai ka ... ~*~

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                    #10
                    two thumbz up

                    thanx for sharing

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                      #11

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                        #12
                        Originally posted by Anwaar Qureshi:
                        wow.. that was beautiful

                        .. especially these two:


                        tootey paRooN k zakham be un ko dekha dee'ay
                        teetli ne saray raaz gulooN ko bata dee'ay

                        is ne be meRi jo simat dekha na phir kabhi
                        maiN be sab chiRaag jala k bhuja dee'ay
                        bari mushkil se hota hia chamaN maiN deeda war paida..
                        ~BadlooN peR baseRa~

                        /)/)..(\(\

                        ( ._.).(._. )
                        o(_(')(')..(')(')_)o

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                          #13
                          Originally posted by cuteepie:
                          wah
                          thanks..
                          ~BadlooN peR baseRa~

                          /)/)..(\(\

                          ( ._.).(._. )
                          o(_(')(')..(')(')_)o

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                            #14
                            Re: Re: tootey paRooN k zakham be un ko dekha dee'ay

                            Originally posted by Azad:


                            Shikar nicks ke zakham be un ko dekha dee'ay
                            Chiknay ne saray raaz Bholay ko bata dee'ay

                            GS Cafe' maiN aj ajeeb waa'qeya huwa
                            Azad~ ki aik Post ne kalay'jay jala dee'ay

                            Capri udaas dekh k kuch soochnay k baad
                            Mod ne Haa'ton ke sub to'tay urraa dee'ay

                            baydaar tu zaror huwey they Hum chat par
                            US ne magaR Block pe dobaRa sulaa dee'ay

                            is ne be meRi msg ko reply kia na phir kabhi
                            maiN ne be sab puranay nicks mett'haa dee'ay


                            Adab Arz




                            ~BadlooN peR baseRa~

                            /)/)..(\(\

                            ( ._.).(._. )
                            o(_(')(')..(')(')_)o

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                              #15
                              Bohat khoob

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