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Aabi

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is justujoo mein le bethe Dil pe zakham hum...

Feb 11, 2004, 09:38 PM

aye thay was'l-e-yaar ka manaane ko Jashan hum
Jaate hein de ke lot kar na aane ki Qasam hum

un ke naseeb mein to tha Gulshan hara bhara
nibhaane ko reh gaye thay bus Wafa ki Rasam hum

intahaa-e-ishq thi jo aatish mein kood paray KHALIL
kiyunkar jal ke aag mein ho jaayein Bhasam hum

tum ko mitaana he hamein Zindagi ke war'q se
is justujoo mein le bethe Dil pe Zakham hum

kuch tha Khayaal-e-abroo Kuch paas-e-wafa thi warna Abid
kiyun zindagi ke bojh ko uthaate Madgham hum
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Swera

Eik Pagal se laRki

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#2

Feb 12, 2004, 08:13 AM

Zindagi boujj to nahiN hoti na

BTW, it's nice
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Dilsay

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#3

Feb 12, 2004, 10:23 AM

Very nice keep it up and do share it with us

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Feb 12, 2004, 07:40 PM
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Azad

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Feb 12, 2004, 10:57 PM

Bohut Khoob

Meray Roz O Shab k Nisaab Main Meray Paas Apna To Kuch Nahi
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Jaan Lewaa

....Mai Pagal....
....Mera Dil Dewana....

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#6

Feb 13, 2004, 12:27 PM

nice

ek khushi dil ne kia maang li
meri har khushi ko nazar lag gyi
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Aabi

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#7

Feb 13, 2004, 10:20 PM

i know swera jee...lakin kisi se suna tha...

dilsay

cutee

JL & azad bhai

thanx
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AQ

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#8

Feb 13, 2004, 11:45 PM

very nice

�Quite often good things have hurtful consequences. There are instances of men who have been ruined by their money or KILLED by their COURAGE.� ~Aristotle
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Amarbail

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#9

Feb 14, 2004, 12:54 AM

Xcellent ...

~*~ Koi sawaal kare tau kya kahun ussay ... Bicharne wale sabab tau bata judai ka ... ~*~
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Aabi

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#10

Feb 14, 2004, 11:15 PM

anwaar bhai & zawan

Thanx
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abc1234

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#11

Feb 15, 2004, 02:56 PM

nice one Aabi
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Aabi

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#12

Feb 21, 2004, 11:56 PM

thanks
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ASA

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#13

Feb 24, 2004, 10:36 AM

nice...

The only one of its own kind.

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Miss Choudary

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#14

Mar 2, 2004, 04:04 AM

Bohat khoob...lovely poem!

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MANAN

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#15

Mar 7, 2004, 06:40 AM

zabardast

Maaaye Nii Mein Kinno Akhaan ...... Dard Vichoray Da Haal Nii ...

Miss You Mom Dad :(

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