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umeed24

Join Date: Jun 23, 2002

Posts: 125
#1

aaj

Jul 26, 2003, 12:07 PM

main aaj likhna chati hoon
un bhooli bisri yadoon ko
tum se ki sari baton ko
tumharai sath guzri sub sa'ato'n ko
woh bin badal barsaton ko
aur
kuch ankahe afsano'n ko
main aaj likhna chati hoon
aur
amar karlaina chati hoon

by umeed
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Dilsay

Join Date: Nov 2, 2002

Posts: 6853
#2

Jul 26, 2003, 01:04 PM

Very nice

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Hijar main khoon rulatay ho kahaan hotay hoo
Loat kar koyoon nahi atay hoo kahan hotay hoo
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#3

Jul 26, 2003, 02:06 PM

beautiful
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arfin99

Join Date: Aug 10, 2000

Posts: 321
#4

Jul 27, 2003, 10:20 AM

Simply Beautifulll
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HeArT HaCKeR

~DreaM WeAVeR~

Join Date: May 28, 2002

Posts: 38076
#5

Jul 27, 2003, 10:54 AM

nice...

~ ... palat k har taraf se kyon nazR us shaks per thehrii?
wafa k silsilo`N kii wo, musalsal inteha thehra ...~
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umeed24

Join Date: Jun 23, 2002

Posts: 125
#6

Jul 27, 2003, 12:02 PM

thx every one for reading my peoms and adding words of encouragement
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PaGaL dEwAnA

tErE bInA mUsHkIl HaI jEeNa

Join Date: Feb 27, 2003

Posts: 3253
#7

Jul 27, 2003, 01:46 PM

kOi MaJnU kOi RaNjhA tOu KoI fArHaD kEhTa HaI
kOi PaGaL kOi dEwAnA tOu KoI kHaRaB kHeTa HaI
pEeTa HoOn DaWa-E-dArD-e-DiL
tOu HaR kOi UsSaY sHaRaB kEhTa HaI
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SuraJ

Join Date: Jun 27, 2003

Posts: 944
#8

Jul 27, 2003, 11:04 PM

bahut hi Alla keep it up
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Zakhmi Umar

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Join Date: Dec 31, 2001

Posts: 9971
#9

Jul 28, 2003, 12:27 AM

nice one thanx for sharing

tumhara aur mera naam jungle mien darakhto.n per
abhi likha hua hai tum kabhi jaa k mitao....
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umeed24

Join Date: Jun 23, 2002

Posts: 125
#10

Jul 28, 2003, 03:47 AM

thx zakhmi umar, suraJ, pagal dewana and others
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