AahaT see koi aa'ye tou laGta hai ke tum ho

[~Nazish~]

AahaT see koi aa'ye tou laGta hai ke tum ho
saaya koi lehra'ye tou laGta hai ke tum ho

jab shaakh koi haath laGaate he chaman maiN
sharma'ye lachak ja'ye tou laGta hai ke tum ho

Sandal se mehkati huee pur kef havaa ka
jhonka koi Takra'ye tou laGta hai ke tum ho

ORey huay taaroN ki chamakti chaadar
nadhi koi bal kha'ye tou laGta hai ke tum ho

Jab raat ga'ye koi kiran mere baraabar
chup chaap se so ja'ye tou laGta hai ke tum

[PaGaL dEwAnA]

eXcElLeNt

[&Passionate]

ohh...wahhhh....great

[Azad]

Meray piya gay rangoon
kia hay wahaan say telephone
keh teri yaad satati hay ........

[Hawkeye]

Re: AahaT see koi aa'ye tou laGta hai ke tum ho

Originally posted by ~Nazish~:
AahaT see koi aa'ye tou laGta hai ke tum ho
saaya koi lehra'ye tou laGta hai ke tum ho

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Nice ... Thanks for sharing

[Zakhmi Umar]

Re: AahaT see koi aa'ye tou laGta hai ke tum ho

Originally posted by ~Nazish~:

Sandal se mehkati huee pur kef havaa ka
jhonka koi Takra'ye tou laGta hai ke tum ho

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nice one, one of my fave

[Zakhmi Umar]

Originally posted by Azad:
Meray piya gay rangoon
kia hay wahaan say telephone
keh teri yaad satati hay ........

Azad sb apne piya ko kahien k computer le le aur net lagwa le ta k telephone ka kharcha bach jaye ga , any time on msn messenger

[Amal]

Re: AahaT see koi aa'ye tou laGta hai ke tum ho

Originally posted by ~Nazish~:
AahaT see koi aa'ye tou laGta hai ke tum ho
saaya koi lehra'ye tou laGta hai ke tum ho

jab shaakh koi haath laGaate he chaman maiN
sharma'ye lachak ja'ye tou laGta hai ke tum ho

Sandal se mehkati huee pur kef havaa ka
jhonka koi Takra'ye tou laGta hai ke tum ho

ORey huay taaroN ki chamakti chaadar
nadhi koi bal kha'ye tou laGta hai ke tum ho

Jab raat ga'ye koi kiran mere baraabar
chup chaap se so ja'ye tou laGta hai ke tum

~Nazish~ be'had khoobsoorat ghazal hey. Kaafi arsa pehley ye ghazal aek
aur member ke saath mil kar aek aek sheir dhoondh kar mukammal ki thi, but it was
worth all the efforts. Thanx for posting such a beautiul piece of poetry. Kya aap is ke
shaer ka naam bata sakti ho please?

[~Nazish~]

Thank you everyone for liking it.
Amal...Poet Jaan Nisar Akhtar hain.

[chand_chehra]

lovely

[Guest]

Xcellent..

[ASA]

nice...

[GuL-e-Tasbeeh]

Lovely:-)

[~Nazish~]

Thanks

[HeArT HaCKeR]

bohat achay