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    ~be basi~

    kabhi kabhi jab
    zindagi ka koi ghum yaad kerke
    tumhari ankhon mein ansoo bhar aatay hein
    toa unko behta deikh ker
    mera ji chahta hai
    ke kaash yeh bhi jism rakhtay
    toa mein un per utnay hi zakhm dalti
    jitnay unko tumhari ankh se behta deikh ker
    meray dil par partay hein !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    by: maheen

    #2
    Awwwwww its so nice
    "Today in heaven they opened up a new chest dedicated to charity. It's name ?"

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      #3
      thanx

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        #4
        Good1....Really nice..

        Keep it up!

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          #5
          Re: ~be basi~

          Originally posted by maheen sajid:
          ke kaash yeh bhi jism rakhtay
          toa mein un per utnay hi zakhm dalti
          jitnay unko tumhari ankh se behta deikh ker
          meray dil par partay hein !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

          by: maheen
          Maheen ji, aansooon ka kaya qasur hai ? Jo rulaata hai uska khaber lain ... aanso tou faqt izhaar hai dukh ka

          BTW, nice poem

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            #6
            nice one maheen ..
            ~BadlooN peR baseRa~

            /)/)..(\(\

            ( ._.).(._. )
            o(_(')(')..(')(')_)o

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              #7
              nice :~)
              I never thought that you'd be the one to hold my heart
              but you came around and you knocked me off the ground from the start....

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                #8
                thanx again

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                  #9
                  zAbArDuS
                  kOi MaJnU kOi RaNjhA tOu KoI fArHaD kEhTa HaI
                  kOi PaGaL kOi dEwAnA tOu KoI kHaRaB kHeTa HaI
                  pEeTa HoOn DaWa-E-dArD-e-DiL
                  tOu HaR kOi UsSaY sHaRaB kEhTa HaI

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                    #10
                    Re: ~be basi~

                    Originally posted by maheen sajid:
                    kabhi kabhi jab
                    zindagi ka koi ghum yaad kerke
                    tumhari ankhon mein ansoo bhar aatay hein
                    toa unko behta deikh ker
                    mera ji chahta hai
                    ke kaash yeh bhi jism rakhtay
                    toa mein un per utnay hi zakhm dalti
                    jitnay unko tumhari ankh se behta deikh ker
                    meray dil par partay hein !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

                    by: maheen

                    nice one thanx for sharing
                    tumhara aur mera naam jungle mien darakhto.n per
                    abhi likha hua hai tum kabhi jaa k mitao....

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                      #11
                      Re: Re: ~be basi~

                      Originally posted by Hawkeye:


                      Maheen ji, aansooon ka kaya qasur hai ? Jo rulaata hai uska khaber lain ... aanso tou faqt izhaar hai dukh ka

                      BTW, nice poem
                      i agreed
                      tumhara aur mera naam jungle mien darakhto.n per
                      abhi likha hua hai tum kabhi jaa k mitao....

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                        #12
                        Something different , Maheen buhat pyaarii nazm hay, keep it up and thanks for sharing :-)
                        .....................................
                        Hum ney kaantoN ko bhi narmii sey chuhwaa hey aksar
                        log be-dard heiN PhooloN ko massal detay heiN

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                          #13
                          nice...
                          ~ ... palat k har taraf se kyon nazR us shaks per thehrii?
                          wafa k silsilo`N kii wo, musalsal inteha thehra
                          ...~

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                            #14
                            wonderful

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                              #15
                              very nice.....
                              The only one of its own kind.

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