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    Etna gahra tha rang-e-hina oos ki hatheli par

    yun to maiN nazm bahot kam likhta hooN..magar ye meri eik puraani nazm hai..shaayad pahle bhii kabhii post kii hogii..yaad nahin..phir bhii aaj padh raha tha to soncha aap logon se share karooN...


    Etna gahra tha rang-e-hina oos ki hatheli par
    Mere naam ki lakeer oos meiN kahiN kho gayee
    Main bhatakta raha apni taqdeer ki talaash mein
    Aur meri bebas taqdeer oos hatheli par hi so gayee

    Wo rang chha gaye meri ankhoN meiN baadloN ki tarah
    Mere jazbaat ashqoN meiN badal gaye
    Mere ehsaas ne dhaal diya enheiN boondoN meiN
    aur kal shab eik saba ke jhonKe mein bah gaye

    haaN ! magar rang tha oosi hina ka
    jo meri taqdeer ko kha gayee
    aur aaj lahoo ban ke
    meri aankhoN ko rula gayee.

    By Pramod
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    #2
    v nice prem ji
    bahut khoob nazm kehi hai aap ne...

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      #3
      Aww its beautiful
      "Today in heaven they opened up a new chest dedicated to charity. It's name ?"

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        #4
        beautiful :~)
        I never thought that you'd be the one to hold my heart
        but you came around and you knocked me off the ground from the start....

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          #5
          nice one pram jee..
          ~BadlooN peR baseRa~

          /)/)..(\(\

          ( ._.).(._. )
          o(_(')(')..(')(')_)o

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            #6
            nazm pasand karne aur honsla afzaai ke liye bahot bahot shukriya
            Asif, MQ.&Passionate and Koyal.

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              #7
              I guess pehley bhi parrhi hey ye nazm. Good try Pramod. Never miss a
              chance to write a nazm for nazms give you more liberty to express yourself. Bas
              bohat ziaada nazmeiN bhi mat likhna warna phir ghazal nahi likh paao ge :~) Make
              a good balance of it and keep it up
              Reh gaya kaam hamaara hi baghawat likhna...

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                #8
                very nice pramod gi
                your lips are keep moving .
                but all i hear is... Blah Blah Blah

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                  #9
                  Nice :-)

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                    #10
                    ahaa... bouhat khoob...
                    The only one of its own kind.

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                      #11
                      boht achay Pramod bhaiyya
                      ~ ... palat k har taraf se kyon nazR us shaks per thehrii?
                      wafa k silsilo`N kii wo, musalsal inteha thehra                       ...~

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                        #12
                        Originally posted by Amal:
                        I guess pehley bhi parrhi hey ye nazm. Good try Pramod. Never miss a
                        chance to write a nazm for nazms give you more liberty to express yourself. Bas
                        bohat ziaada nazmeiN bhi mat likhna warna phir ghazal nahi likh paao ge :~) Make
                        a good balance of it and keep it up
                        Padhii hogii aap ne . shaayad main ne pahle bhii post kiya tha.
                        I will think for nazm now..in fact ! I will start reading few to get the rythem..
                        thanks Amal

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                          #13
                          nazm pasand karne aur honsla afzaai karne ke liye shukriya ...Chand jii,~Nazish~,AsA and HeArT HaCKeR sahiba....

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                            #14
                            kia baat hai
                            thanks pramod

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                              #15
                              Xcellent Pramod ...

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