Thakan..

[Swera]

Mery lehjay ki thakan keh rahi hay ya mujj say
Meri ankooN kay sirab keh rahaiN haiN haiN ya mujj say
Keh day haan ajj tu keh hi day
Na to choopanay ka hunar ata hay tujj ko na hi tu seekh pay gi
Mery thaky thaky say qadam uth to rahaiN haiN magar ruk kioN ya jatyiN haiN?
Teray ghar ki janib magar dekho to rasta bhi to maloom nahiN hay
Poochnay pay bhi bataya nahiN hay us nay ya kesa zulm hay
Kaha to tha kay bin bulai mehmaN nahiN hoon magar
Usay shaid aik hi cheez rokti hay or wo maiN jantiN hoon shaid
Taqdeer-o-Qismat, feslay wo atal....ya Dastoor-e-DuniyaN
To kiya wo samjta hay zehan maiN meri ya baat nahiN hay?
Magar kiya karaiN ik ThoR sa yaqeN hay mujjay or baas
Suna hay wo diaa saab ki sun lay ga wo teri meri bhi
Magar Duaaon say faqat badla karty nahiN haiN ya feslay.

By Subha




Hi, Salam..


Ajj main last time apni poetry ap say share kaar rahiN hoon.
NahiN phir karoon gi, but not any time soon...
No, main kahiN nahiN ja rahi>-) gai to choopkay say jaoon gi, or jaoon gi bhi kion?

I just wana say something...

About, Khamoshi, taqdeer-o-qismat...ect



Ya jo loog Choop rehtaiN haiN na or sochtaiN haiN wo hood hi samj jay ga.... they are wrong. WHY? Many reasons, apny say insan kooch bhi soch sakta hay, 2, sirf humary sochnay say kooch nahin hota,3, Tadeer-o-qismat ko na koso loggo open ur eyes..... Kooch to likha hi hota hay kooch hum loog khud hi likhwa letain hain ya likh letain hain...
Or dosh apni buzdili ko apni na manay ki baat ko TQADEER ka likha kaha jata hay..

Phir jaab kooch kho jata hay phir ansoo bahain jataiN hain...

So ajj hum kooch rooz kay liya shesh-e-screen say ja rahaiN haiN....
Aray baba no laRai plz, main sirf kooch kehnay kay mood maiN hoon ajj....

[Amarbail1]

U leaving due to ???
Pls stay at the forum, its a request...

[Swera]

Originally posted by Amarbail:
U leaving due to ???
Pls stay at the forum, its a request...

awww, So sweat of you dear sis I accept ur reqest I'm not leaving.. but .....

[Amarbail1]

Originally posted by Swera:


awww, So sweat of you dear sis I accept ur reqest I'm not leaving.. but .....

Please, dont' leave...
Hope this time my request won't be rejected ...

[Swera]

Originally posted by Amarbail:


Please, dont' leave...
Hope this time my request won't be rejected ...

Acepted

if u comment on my post not just good swera jee

[Amarbail1]

Thanks a lot Swera ...

[Adeel786]

Re: Thakan..

Originally posted by Swera:

Teray ghar ki janib magar dekho to rasta bhi to maloom nahiN hay
Poochnay pay bhi bataya nahiN hay us nay ya kesa zulm hay


Suna hay wo diaa saab ki sun lay ga wo teri meri bhi
Magar Duaaon say faqat badla karty nahiN haiN ya feslay.

By Subha




Hi, Salam..


Ajj main last time apni poetry ap say share kaar rahiN hoon.
NahiN phir karoon gi, but not any time soon...
No, main kahiN nahiN ja rahi>-) gai to choopkay say jaoon gi, or jaoon gi bhi kion?

I just wana say something...

About, Khamoshi, taqdeer-o-qismat...ect



Ya jo loog Choop rehtaiN haiN na or sochtaiN haiN wo hood hi samj jay ga.... they are wrong. WHY? Many reasons, apny say insan kooch bhi soch sakta hay, 2, sirf humary sochnay say kooch nahin hota,3, Tadeer-o-qismat ko na koso loggo open ur eyes..... Kooch to likha hi hota hay kooch hum loog khud hi likhwa letain hain ya likh letain hain...
Or dosh apni buzdili ko apni na manay ki baat ko TQADEER ka likha kaha jata hay..

Phir jaab kooch kho jata hay phir ansoo bahain jataiN hain...

So ajj hum kooch rooz kay liya shesh-e-screen say ja rahaiN haiN....
Aray baba no laRai plz, main sirf kooch kehnay kay mood maiN hoon ajj....

hmm tu jub bhee jaein ge khamoshe sey jaein ge leiken aap jaein ge kaisey aap ko jub yahan sey koi janey he nahein dey ga tu phir . plz stay here coz hum sub ko aap ke poetry ka intazar rehta hey .

i think aap kahein nahein jaein gee aur poetry bhee send karte rahein gee .
Thanx bus itna he kehna thaa.

[WiseGuy]

Salaam,
Please don't go...
Infact we need a poem a day...
Its a request too...
Thanks

Usay shaid aik hi cheez rokti hay or wo maiN jantiN hoon shaid
Aap jaanti hain
Bohat achi nazam hai... Thanks for sharing....

[Swera]

Re: Re: Thakan..

Originally posted by Adeel786:


hmm tu jub bhee jaein ge khamoshe sey jaein ge leiken aap jaein ge kaisey aap ko jub yahan sey koi janey he nahein dey ga tu phir . plz stay here coz hum sub ko aap ke poetry ka intazar rehta hey .

i think aap kahein nahein jaein gee aur poetry bhee send karte rahein gee .
Thanx bus itna he kehna thaa.

Okay me here, Keep posting Wo asal main jaab upset hoti na to phir baas......


Itna kooch to kaha ap nay, Chalin ajj hum kooch or post kartaiN hain

[Swera]

Originally posted by WiseGuy:
Salaam,
Please don't go...
Infact we need a poem a day...
Its a request too...
Thanks

Usay shaid aik hi cheez rokti hay or wo maiN jantiN hoon shaid
Aap jaanti hain
Bohat achi nazam hai... Thanks for sharing....

Walaikumsalam,


Okay baba okay I'm here not leaving,

Was I leaving in the 1st place?


Ahan, a poem a day (by Subha) keeps the ....away.



ThaNk You. ...& u r Welcome...